Outline - Driveabout - The Dog Trainer
Added 2018-06-20 08:06:09 +0000 UTCThis is another outline that the finished product ended up being quite different from the actual stories. The basics are there but I broke the story up into two parts which I didn't expect to do. This story was written for a friend.
(Spoilers!)
Xander decides to go see an old friend. Finds her at a dog show doing a routine
- Heather - describes heather like [redacted so she doesn’t beat me stupid]
- Explains that he knows heather but she won’t remember him
- Meets up with her afterwards to talk to her.
- Tries to use orb but fails
- Instead rethinks his plan and uses a hypnotic seduction technique
- Seduces her into dinner.
- Hypnotizes her over dinner. Gives her suggestions.
- Meets her at his hotel room.
- Uses a ‘good puppy trigger’ which drops her to her knees
- Little hypnotized hijinx.
- Story ends with xander leaving the hotel room heather passed out on the bed behind him.
