Outline - A Brief Pause
Added 2018-06-20 07:52:46 +0000 UTCThis was the outline that I used to create the story "A brief pause" which can be found here: http://www.spiralsnightclub.com/2018/03/ncu-brief-pause.html It is the first of the N.C.U. story line.
(The outline may differ from the final story line) (also spoilers).
Yuto P.D.
- Eve working as an assistant to the P.D.
- Cleaning up leftover stuff from sleepndarlin's stories (Sleepndarlin is my IRL girlfriend).
- Working on cleaning the stasis pod she trips and hits the button the close the door.
- Two buttons open and freeze.
- Hits wrong button
Ten years of bureaucratic bullshit later
New Chicago University
- Trisha working on grad student project
- Going through stuff sent from Yuto
- Discovers cryopod, about to discard it when discovers person in it.
- Drags in Laura to try and help her open it.
- While Laura is working on the pod Trisha discovers hypnotic device left over from spirals
- Hypnotizes herself with it.
- Laura manages to open the pod and thaw Eve
- Tries to explain what's going on and that ten years have passed
- They discover trisha tranced and eve turns off the device
- Trisha starts to ask her questions in high speed style
- Eve is distracted looking at the hypnotic device
- Accidentally turns it on and hypnotizes herself
- Trisha see’s and realizes what her grad project should be, on hypnosis and susceptibility
- Gives suggests to eve to want to stay and move in with trisha for observation
- Laura objects, but trisha turns the device on her and programs her with a new memory
- Scene ends with trisha looking at laura and eve and deciding a little … fun might be in order.
