Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 208
Added 2025-10-12 20:16:30 +0000 UTCWe had just gotten on the road when I decided to switch subjects to something that really needed to be discussed with Nicole. Specifically, something that was going to affect her...
October 12, 2025
NOTE: For those who follow my other stories, Immortal Supers Book 6 audiobook will be releasing soon (it's very long, something like 26 hours). Combat Healer Book 1 audio should be releasing soon too (here in the next 2-3 weeks).
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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?
1. Thoughts on the conversation with Nicole?
2. Thoughts Nicole/Avery interaction?
3. Thoughts the MC's new 'tool' (black liquid)? It's 'practical' yes, but have you considered what else it might be able to do?
4. What information are you hoping to learn from Kelsey? (I don't want anyone to be disappointed. We are truly close to discovering 'who Eve is' in the story.)
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Comments
Ironically, that question is answered in the 'Author's Notes' of the audiobook. The story will feel like it has 'ended' at the end of Book 6 (in the sense that all the major plot points have been resolved), but I could always add more to the story.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2025-10-19 14:38:20 +0000 UTCGood catch! I fixed it.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2025-10-19 14:37:13 +0000 UTCI don't think that part has been fully explained.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2025-10-19 14:36:16 +0000 UTCGood catch! I fixed it.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2025-10-19 14:35:06 +0000 UTCSome thoughts from me on another excellent chapter: 1) I do feel kinda bad for Nicole, considering the woman shes loved for over a decade not only has another body, but the body that she inhabited whilst with Nicole is actually the "spare". Hopefully, as long as Eves personality remains unchanged no matter what body she inhabits, then there shouldnt be too much of an issue; i do hope she is at least blonde, since that seems to be an important and desirable physical characteristic to Nicole. 2) I loved how Avery kind of got her own back on Nicole, by being the aggressor this time during their intimate encounter. Really the way Avery commanded every interaction up until she took the drivers seat was awesome and very hot, since she has seemed much more shy/nervous during similar scenarios in the past. I also thought Rosa taking charge for once was great, with it reminding me of a thought/idea i had a while ago, one that involved Rebecca becoming almost a "sex mentor/guru" for the younger, more sexually inexperienced members of the harem. She is, after all, a very maternal/loving woman, whilst also being a dominatrix succubus who possesses a core aura of 'confidence'. These attributes, for me, could see her helping the younger women of the harem, such as Rosa, Avery, Raegan etc to not only gain more sexual confidence, but to also discover their own personal kinks and desires. For example, i think it would be quite cool if Kai were to wonder why Rosa suddenly took charge during their sex in the car, only for him to see in her thoughts that she has been testing out an array of sexual acts with Rebecca and that through this, they discovered she has a kink/fetish for deep throating (maybe the realization came from Rosa practicing/learning how to give a blowjob, with them using Rebeccas tail as a substitute penis), which then led to her 'worshipping' Kais cock in a very specific/particular way during the car ride. This could then be a sort of ongoing, background situation that results in some of Kais women surprising him with new/unique sexual experiences, either by themselves or alongside some of his other women, that theyve discovered through their interactions with Rebecca. I also know Rebecca hasnt done great in popularity polls, but since shes Miriams 'daughter' and Gabriellas mother, i feel like its harder for her to have less of a 'part' in the story than say Laura or Tracey, so this could give her a specific 'role' in regards to the sexual aspect of the story, whilst allowing her to take a backseat in the more plot heavy storylines. However, this is just an idea, predicated on Rebecca still not being one of the more popular women, which may not be the case anymore/in the future. Also, this idea doesnt really need to be decided upon/set in stone right now, as there are other, more important things happening currently that could change the story and our overall perceptions of certain characters going forward; still, i thought i might as well share anyway, just incase its something you might be interested in exploring. 3) Finally, when i thought of the black liquid i immediately thought of him using it as a fake cock to facilitate some double-penetration action with his women.
Carl
2025-10-16 01:59:52 +0000 UTCYou mention in author notes about life of immortal, is there gonna be a book 7? Love that one as well as the ones here
Christopher Johnson
2025-10-13 14:06:38 +0000 UTC"including glossy cheery red vinyl sleeves" - I think this is supposed to be cherry, but I could be wrong.
CausticWraith
2025-10-13 03:48:55 +0000 UTCDo we know the mechanism of how Eve jumps between bodies? I can’t remember.
slugbiscuit
2025-10-13 02:54:23 +0000 UTCwas actually happening.
Jonathan Depenau
2025-10-12 21:13:54 +0000 UTCbut also a mirror of what.....
Jonathan Depenau
2025-10-12 21:10:32 +0000 UTC
