Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 204
Added 2025-09-15 03:48:36 +0000 UTCIf it weren’t for the fact that Petra had noticed first, then I might very well have thought that the haze was...
September 14, 2025
NOTE: Lots going on in this chapter. Hope you enjoy!
UPDATE: I officially hit ‘publish’ on Immortal Supers Book 6 audiobook, so hopefully it will be released sometime this week on Audible and Apple (it’s a little over 25 hours long).
Combat Healer Book 1 audio should be releasing soon too (here in the next 2-3 weeks).
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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?
Okay, so this is a chapter that I would have liked to spend more time editing/plotting, because there's a lot going on and I like to take the time to sort of 'dwell on the chapter' when I can (in order to perhaps add or rewrite things to make is smoother). BUT I can also just get feedback from you guys and make adjustments if needed.
So, what did you think?
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Comments
OH MAN, that was both exciting and way too short. Took me by surprise, never expected to see Kai's dad back. and also glad I was wrong in my single prediction. Nice to be surprised. Keep it up please. Thank you.
Sparkyrex
2025-11-09 19:10:20 +0000 UTCExited as sh*t by avery's new form but kinda sad too cuz when i read halo i 100% thought we finally met eve.
Frédéric Falardeau
2025-10-30 00:04:05 +0000 UTCIt ISN'T just Eve and Kai. Everyone with a vampiric curse who has it broken gains the increased size. It's happened to Roland (he's, confirmed it but we haven't seen it as yet) Rosa, and Dante.
Christopher Miller
2025-09-18 07:37:20 +0000 UTCWell, #1, Kai did say Roland could give Micah some blood to see if it could break her curse. Kai wasn't hopeful because it's never worked before. Obviously, there is an x-factor in play here.
Christopher Miller
2025-09-18 07:31:12 +0000 UTCSo many questions. But great chapter. For one didn't Kai give Rowland permission to give Micah his blood? Another thing, Eve can grow large like Kai. I wonder why only him and her can do that... Again I sing trust Rowland. Someone who's had power for centuries doesn't just give it up. Rowland is probably done taking orders. I feel Eve knows she will have to protect Kai from Rowland. Avery being half vamp/angel is interesting. Kai definitely has a hare of BB's. I think he should have killed his father and his crew. Never leave a loose thread be. It will soon unravel.
J Bone
2025-09-16 06:17:01 +0000 UTC
