Combat Healer Ch. 73
Added 2025-02-17 00:56:45 +0000 UTCFebruary 16, 2025
NOTE: This is a LONG chapter (10,000 words, double the length of my minimum), so I hope you guys enjoy it!
Also, after initially writing this, I had to edit it at least three times (if not four or five times -- I’ve lost track), just because the ‘flow’ felt kind of clunky to me and I’m not entirely sure if I fully resolved the problem (hopefully it ‘reads well’ to you guys).
Let me know what you think!
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Okay, so I'm sure you guys have noticed that something 'big' is on the horizon. Kind of curious what you guys think it might be (probably will exceed your expectations either way, but still curious). Anyway...
1. What did you think about the scene with Astaer? Did the whole 'crow situation' feel ominous? Was there anything that you felt like you wanted more of? Such as more of Blake talking, more of Remi talking, etc. Thoughts on Astaer viewing them as her little ducklings due to their heights compared to hers?
2. Thoughts about Sera? I went kind of heavy on the description of her, but my goal was to really ingrain her appearance in your mind. Thoughts about her? Her appearance? Her personality? Etc.? This is kind of the first time we are really getting some decent interaction with her.
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Comments
The crow scene was extremely well written and did a great job of building intensity. Extremely excited to see what disaster is on the horizon. Like similar comments, I also felt that the description of Sera was a little too repetitive to the point it felt redundant. Interesting aspect to the story and hopeful that this story arc has put Allister in a place he needs to be to deal with the impending crisis. Would be unique to see that fate led him here for something bigger.
HapiCpl
2025-03-04 15:03:50 +0000 UTCI like the build up with tension back at home and at the whore house. I will say it did seem like paragraphs of descriptive writing about Sera’s looks. It seemed to take up the whole storyline between her and him.
J Bone
2025-02-19 00:37:24 +0000 UTCI pretty much made the quote up, about 'one or two, four or more,' etc.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2025-02-17 14:45:17 +0000 UTCI did like the tension of the crow scene.
Silent Count
2025-02-17 06:31:32 +0000 UTCAs far as Sera goes, the details of her gold lipstick, the nipple chain, the diaphanous cloak were interesting and oddly erotic. So, would it be common for a healer to become emotionally and physically attracted to those they heal? Is that a big reason most of the female healers are fuck toys for their teams?
Christopher Miller
2025-02-17 03:38:49 +0000 UTCIRL crows really are super intelligent as Astaer described them. I wouldn't be surprised to find out that proverb she quoted would have been a historical one. Historically crows have anticipated ambushes, battles, plagues, etc, and gathered in anticipation of a feast. Yes, crows feed off corpses of humans, horses, mules, dogs, etc.
Christopher Miller
2025-02-17 03:34:07 +0000 UTCI like the crows as a show of an ominous premonition especially since a group of crows is called a "murder". As for Sera I felt the description was well done and definitely helped paint a picture of her in my mind. Would be interesting if some artwork of her was created and it matched the picture I have in my imagination.
Thouz83
2025-02-17 01:55:11 +0000 UTC
