Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 171
Added 2024-10-27 19:20:06 +0000 UTCOctober 27, 2024
NOTE: I’m going to be running 2-3 polls this week.
A ‘Pick 5,’ a ‘Pick just 1,’ and I might also run a poll of ‘Who is your least favorite?' (probably a Pick 3) for the female characters in the harem.
I don’t plan on including certain side characters (like Tracey will remain a side character, and I probably won’t include Nicole either), but it will still be a list of like 16 characters. These will be the top 5 you can’t live without (please only pick your top 5, not top 6), and I will use the poll to make a list of who I need to make sure gets plenty of screentime in future plot.
Hope you enjoy!
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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?
Any ideas of what is going to happen next chapter?
1. Thoughts on Raegan and her situation? (Or about Kai's indirect involvement.)
2. Thoughts about Jessica so far? (Would she make it to your top 5, if I included her in the poll? She is basically alt-Gabriella, in terms of the role she 'might' have played in his life, had things turned out differently. Not exactly in terms of personality, but in terms of teaching Kai a thing or two about intimacy. Yes, she does have the capacity to be faithful, and there's actually a very understandable reason why she's been 'living life to the fullest' while she can. But that's all I'll say for now. If at least one person would pick her as their top 5, despite knowing this little about her, then I'll at least put her on the list.)
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Comments
I do want to add that I do think Rachael does deserve some actual rell time to show that she's important to him and deserves to be in his life, he created her first for himself for God sakes and so far she's been very meh, like he can live without her, which shouldn't be the case.... What happened to his thought being of nothing but her, or him wanting to breed her so bad, he bred a very and Michelle lol
Allen Ferriola
2025-01-15 12:56:32 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, weird tho. Something is up with Jessica that we just haven't learned yet. Also I don't think I could pick a top 5, I care for just about all the women except for Reagan. I'm sure there is some people that absolutely love her, but I think she's just too much trouble for what she has to offer. I would much rather prefer Rachael and Nicole over all this with Reagan. And he needs to just compel her ex husband to disappear lol. And he needs to stop being a pushover with other men, all it would probably take is a certain look from him and most humans would piss their selves in his presence lol
Allen Ferriola
2025-01-15 12:54:07 +0000 UTCHowever I do feel like Rachael and Kelsey are supposed to be the top 1 girls for him anyways considering they are his sword and shield, just using your words. Also seeing Jessica's tattoo reminds me of Roland begging for mercy when he thought he was going to die the "faith over fear", I know it can be played off as a general saying but it seems like she's tied to him as an ally from his past, this I could be completely wrong.
Allen Ferriola
2025-01-15 12:15:31 +0000 UTCBefore I even start reading how could you not include Nicole, she belongs to him and is very powerful. Also something to add, have Delilah start making more illusion rings for this purpose exactly. It won't help right now, but in the centuries to come you never know. Also no real reason to not include all of his women, just have some sprinkled into each chapter, some might ride a few chapters because they are busy with him at that exact moment but either way they are all busy at the mansion just waiting for him to get home. You don't necessarily need to have every woman in every chapter, nor include what each woman is doing in each chapter. If anything when you bring them back into the spotlight just a quick preface of what they've been doing the last few chapter, aka been tied up being used by Mariam, quick easy and simple, then no one is pushed away from Kai
Allen Ferriola
2025-01-15 12:08:00 +0000 UTCHi im stuck at ch 132. Im a $3 member and can't get the website to register my patron account. I became a member last week if that's the problem.
Skycrane
2025-01-06 02:59:25 +0000 UTCTop 5 1. Natalie(favorite woman in the storyline) 2. Kelsey 3. Mariam 4. Liz 5. Gabrielle
J Bone
2024-10-30 00:41:51 +0000 UTCSounds like Jessica isn't human. And I don't really want her to be a main character. She's not even close to top 5... Nick being with her is the best for Kai situation. He wouldn't be interested in Serninity. I wonder if Avery's dad knows more than we think. I bet he's involved in some crazy stuff. Have you forgotten Gabrielle as Kai's first girlfriend? We haven't seen those two together in a while. Although you keep hinting at him spend time with her.
J Bone
2024-10-30 00:39:38 +0000 UTCLeave out Jessica, too many cops are involved anyway, and if she gets turned by Kie, it would be difficult to explain if two female cops suddenly call out because they both have tail problems at the same time. I could see Nick asking Kie for help if this is a common occurrence.
RadAsha Nightstrider
2024-10-29 04:47:33 +0000 UTCI'm team Gabriella, Serenity, Avery, etc... pretty much the original members of his group. I also noticed that you had him bonded with Kelsey ,however I don't remember bonding to anyone else. She was present when Rebecca and Reagan bonded. So that beg the question did she bond automatically because Kai's past self made her and if so then why did Rachel not auto bond the same way?
Sparda
2024-10-28 08:57:57 +0000 UTCAwesome - I do like the idea of Kai and the team assisting Serenity and Nick catch the baddies that don’t necessarily need to be exploded. The supernatural baddies is where Kai does his thing.
Rupert Purcat
2024-10-28 07:10:35 +0000 UTCI actually kind of agree, I feel that Kai needs more people in the PD that are able to get him more information about the various players in the underworld of the city. As for Jessica, I have a feeling that there's a LOT more than meets the eye going on with her. The whole sweet smell mixed with death kind of sounds like how Miriam described Kai to smell when he killed someone recently.
J N
2024-10-27 23:23:39 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, I'm going to assume one of his brothers is possible ally just walked in.
Moi465
2024-10-27 22:29:02 +0000 UTCThis would make sense only if you didn't take into account that a lot of the members in his harem have been people he either met in his past or designed to meet. Plus Jessica has been in the story through passing mention and Nick was part of the earlier story.
Moi465
2024-10-27 22:27:53 +0000 UTCAll for a harem story, but I think it isn't a good habit to add a new member whenever a new situation arises. Also makes it kinda questionable with how careful Kai is about picking new people. In my opinion new people should either be allies for a longer time, with us getting to know them for at least a few chapter/story weeks or supernaturals that Kai might have known from before.
xilefs
2024-10-27 22:08:34 +0000 UTC"how much love and affection their was", think this needs to be "there"?
Moi465
2024-10-27 21:58:01 +0000 UTCNah, I feel no loyalty to Nick. Just Jessica
Jonathan Depenau
2024-10-27 21:06:30 +0000 UTCIf anything put Nick and Jessica together and bring them into the fold to the point of giving them his blood. Having three officers on your side is better than one that’s probably still in the hotbox for going off on her own and breaking protocol
Raul Salazar
2024-10-27 20:31:15 +0000 UTCGood chapter. I think Kai should step back and let Roland and his son handle it. I am a sucker for a slutty tramp stamp and another kinky Gabriella type I am all for it.
The Archer
2024-10-27 20:22:26 +0000 UTC💗 nice, thank you for the Chapter 😍👍
Chris M.
2024-10-27 20:16:25 +0000 UTC
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