Innocent Devilβs Harem Ch. 165
Added 2024-08-26 00:29:32 +0000 UTCAugust 25, 2024
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This chapter continues to get into some interesting territory.
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Decent chapter, but I am still waiting for the time where Miriam and Kai go at it when he's fully transformed with his crown. Not only will be be almost 13 feet to her what 4 feet, but I'm assuming he will be much bigger down there, and because her privates can grown she can fit him, and she will quite literally be a sex doll for him in that moment..... I'm not into the head crap, honestly because it doesn't involve his dick in her lol, but that would be hot to see, especially the huge size difference.
Allen Ferriola
2025-01-14 17:11:34 +0000 UTCYou know what I can't help but wonder, and I could be way off basis even tho it's off topic..... But what if eve played a part in teleporting his dad away to keep him from doing something stupid that would start a war against him, and she's been MIA since that weekend because she's trying to get Absalom to calm down, drop his pride and realize his "son" could be a huge ally. It just seems weird that she's been missing since. I mean she knows everything he's done even as a child from his first transformation to his first kill, but then what I don't understand is why she would risk letting him die when he was caught by giant spears.... Idk tho I just started this chapter lol
Allen Ferriola
2025-01-14 16:55:38 +0000 UTCFun chapter! To be honest, there are a lot of things I'm looking forward to. I mean, NINE tails for Kitsune? Learning about Raegan, Kelsey, Liz, & Rebecca's affinities? Seeing if there is an Ice affinity hiding in among the newcomers? FCOL, a TAIL ORGY?!? Raegan's origins? Who will be bonding with who? And yes, also bringing Claire and Tracy into the inner circle as well, at least eventually. I would champion Claire as a bond match for Liz.
Christopher Miller
2024-08-29 14:32:58 +0000 UTCThis chapter took almost 20 hours to write, and I spent all day Saturday and part of the day Sunday trying to finish it up. I understand wanting to see more plot movement, but I generally write this story in 'arcs,' with some of those arcs involving more slice-of-life, and I've got half of you guys wanting more slice-of-life and the other half wanting more action. Which means, when we get to the arcs where slice-of-life can't really happen, half are you are somewhat disappointed and the other half are thrilled (and vice versa). There are also some weeks where I have almost no time to write, and so I have to choose between having a chapter of 'something' or not having one at all (and of course, I don't view 'not having a chapter' as an option, so I have to put out something). I've also a lot of you guys wanting me to write on Combat Healer, and those chapters take so much more time to write, so I figured it might not be a bad idea to spend some time on working on the next chapter for that (in hopes that I will have one available in the next 1-2 weeks). Glad you overall liked the chapter, and if you have ideas of things you want me to explore, then please share them. Sometimes I forget my own ideas that I'd inserted earlier on in the story (especially when it's been a year or longer since I actually hinted at them).
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-08-26 17:08:26 +0000 UTCThe chapter was interesting and it looks like the next will be fun. I'd like to see more main plot movement since they're uncovering information which is great and the Kelsey and Rachel reveal was cool but they seem to be running out of goals or actions to take. There's been a lot of possible things that will happened that have been mentioned throughout the story and I would live to see them kicking into gear a bit.
Moi465
2024-08-26 13:50:11 +0000 UTC
