Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 163
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I actually have some very interesting things planned for the next few chapters.
Once Kai gets back to Miriam’s mansion, we will actually get into some plot (real plot). I wanted to hint at it in this chapter, but there wasn’t really a good spot to do so.
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Comments
I would agree with all this plus Kelsey is shaping up to be a hotter than hell partner. The sex was hot, but the build-up to the orgy at the mansion is also a reason this chapter felt super erotic.
Christopher Miller
2024-08-15 18:01:53 +0000 UTCMy opinion is that there is a 0.00% chance that there is no connection between the succubi and the Kitsune demons. Everything we have learned about them so far, other than possibly their magic affinity seems to completely line up as a mirror image. Their true diet and feeding method and schedule, check. Their abilities to attract and seduce mortals, check. Their maple syrup like scent, check. Even the fact that Raegan is female instead of male points to this. We know incubi normally only sire male heirs, .....unless, they procreate with a race that normally only produces female children. Like, succubi, or presumably Kitsune. If incubi normally only produce boys, and Kitsune and succubi only produce female children does it mean the chances of either gender being produced reverts to a 50/50 shot? Or does that mean that an offspring from a succubus/incubus pairing would be impossible? Given that Raegan is alive as direct proof, that a kitsune is a mirror image of succubi it should point to their being an even chance of a child of either gender being born as a possibility.
Christopher Miller
2024-08-14 22:35:51 +0000 UTCI liked that Kai was stepping into his role as the head of their family. He was finally really acting on providing for the psychological health of his women paired with their sexual health as well. It seemed like starting a path to a deeper intimacy. This was shown by how each of his women kind of finally slotted in his mind. All having a purpose to his new existence.
James Clausi
2024-08-13 16:55:59 +0000 UTCWell done. I think your pacing and flow is improving.
Florida Reader
2024-08-13 03:47:27 +0000 UTCWhat made it so good? Like, what specific parts made this particular steamy scene that great? Which part(s) did you like most? When I actually wrote this, I sort of thought it was 'just okay,' so kind of surprised it might be better than okay.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-08-13 03:46:43 +0000 UTCThis is just my opinion, but I think Kai should bring ALL of his women to the mansion tonight. They all need to be bonded if possible, because things may become all the more dangerous at any time for any of them. Nicole and Claire are in public at school for the next few weeks. Tracy is completely clueless about almost everything. Basically, this is a good time for the new women to meet everyone else, and to get as many of them bonded as possible. The entire harem needs Kai's and Roland's numbers at least, as emergency contacts. Elizabeth is a top priority to bond, and it's Claire who is one of the best candidates. There are several other women who have unconfirmed or completely unknown affinities. I'm especially looking at Rebecca, Tracy, Laura, Raegan and Kelsey. Kai should be thinking, what if only one or two women are compatible with Elizabeth and they aren't the one(s) there?
Christopher Miller
2024-08-12 00:52:14 +0000 UTCThank god I’m at out at the pool. Had to take a few dips to cool down from this one. Nice work.
James Clausi
2024-08-11 22:36:54 +0000 UTCGood chapter, looking forward to the real plot starting!
Moi465
2024-08-11 22:00:06 +0000 UTC"loud slap every time Kelsey started" Kelsey is shown split across multiple lines
Moi465
2024-08-11 21:56:05 +0000 UTC"Which was exactly what she did. Exactly what we did." ^ this might need a correction?
Moi465
2024-08-11 21:49:13 +0000 UTC"Especially since it was her deepest kink. Becoming a cum-dump for a horny eighteen-year-old was her deepest kink." Seems repetitive, just having the second one would do.
Moi465
2024-08-11 21:21:30 +0000 UTC"whatever environment she found herself in" I would recommend "any environment she found herself in" instead.
Moi465
2024-08-11 21:04:18 +0000 UTC
