Combat Healer Ch. 62
Added 2024-06-09 19:00:52 +0000 UTCJune 9, 2024
NOTE: This series often requires a lot more detailed plotting compared to Innocent Devil's Harem, and so sometimes I may be slow on these chapters.
Sorry about that, but it's a better story if I really know where the plot is going.
Already, the beginning of this very chapter is different than what I had initially planned when I wrote the last chapter.
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1. What did you think about the italicized part?
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Comments
I'll say the same thing about this story as I did about IDH; too many new characters are being introduced to keep them all straight. He has yet to consummate his relationship with Val and you seem to be adding personnel at an astonishing rate. Hard to become invested in characters when he is adding every women in the kingdom to his list of concubines. Almost becoming too much work for the reader to keep up with. You may want to "rein it in" a little bit.
Snappy Jo McGillicutty
2024-10-15 13:28:09 +0000 UTCVoid avatar was intriguing, not sure about the rest of it, I mean, I thought that Princess Marta would keep quiet about the circumstances especially since many would love to abuse the situation. Also, if the bounty on Mel is "mafia like", maybe send in Wren to sort it all out? LOL. Odd that Remi seems most comfortable, will be interested to see how Princess Marta recovers.
Rhys
2024-06-10 22:37:27 +0000 UTCAlso, I understand it's impossible to cover all the characters in a chapter, but Hailey was physically present for almost the whole chapter, yet was barely mentioned. After her big reveals I was hoping for a bit more of a focus on her. However, I do understand how it is Marta who has be the focus of the plot for a bit.
Christopher Miller
2024-06-10 13:48:17 +0000 UTCThe appearance of the Feathered Goddess/Angel made me wonder if it could be an ancestor of Lyla?
Christopher Miller
2024-06-10 13:43:49 +0000 UTCI'm prob wrong, but hey, sounds cool lol
Jonathan Depenau
2024-06-10 13:38:42 +0000 UTCHoly shit it's the Goddess, except who knows where or when. Awesome!
Jonathan Depenau
2024-06-10 13:33:59 +0000 UTCAli having so many powerful women around him is going to draw some bad attention. I can already see some elves looking at him as a threat. Especially now they know about the bracelets. And princess's powers.
J Bone
2024-06-10 07:36:34 +0000 UTCI'm curious where the Girl in the void story goes. Good introduction to a seemingly new character.
Thouz83
2024-06-10 00:47:14 +0000 UTCWasn't her response "fine" using italics to represent frustration
Moi465
2024-06-09 23:39:01 +0000 UTCRegarding: > barely noticed anything italised but it worked well for emphasis, not so well with signaling frustration Can you elaborate? Not sure what you mean.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-06-09 23:33:55 +0000 UTCThe chapter was fine, barely noticed anything italised but it worked well for emphasis, not so well with signaling frustration. The interactions were good.
Moi465
2024-06-09 21:31:32 +0000 UTCI was hoping it was a CH weekend. Oh happy day.
Silent Count
2024-06-09 19:54:05 +0000 UTC
