Combat Healer Ch. 60
Added 2024-04-28 21:06:07 +0000 UTCApril 28, 2024
NOTE: This chapter is nearly 70% longer than my baseline (almost 2 chapters long), so I hope you enjoy!
ALSO, I generally write slower on this story just because it involves so much plotting.
Good QUALITY takes time!
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>Feedback requested by Kurtis. Meant to be constructive and from my point of view. Kurtis has several times wanted to know what people want. So, here’s what I want, and I am sure that at least some other people share some of these desires. I prefer my fiction to have elements of romance and violence and/or smart thinking to overcome enemies and challenges. I also prefer the old-fashion sexual relationship of man-and-woman that leads to our species continuing to exist. Romance becomes more difficult and not very believable in large harems. It is a matter of available time. Likewise, if a person says that he loves a woman as his wife and affords her little of his time, then his actions are not aligning with his words. He is a liar. >I like family and team work. I like powerful protagonist but not all-powerful protagonists. If we are discussing super heroes, I prefer Spider Man over Super Man. It’s kind of boring when the protagonist can deal with all problems by himself without danger. Instead, using formidable abilities alongside other capable teammates to fulfill a good strategic plan that allows them to accomplish something special – that’s heroic. I like it. >I like story. Without story, any fictional book is simply garbage. Story comes from primary two aspects, the characters and the plot. Are the characters believable? Do the characters show individuality and respond in ways that fit their character and perhaps are similar to people you deal with on a daily basis? Is the plot interesting and believable? Even with fantasy and science fiction, there are times in some books that I find inconsistencies in their world or even scientific laws (in regards to science fiction). Sometimes, it is more subtle but still ruins immersion, requiring a suspension of belief. >Smut books are not story books. Smut books have a major part of their words depicting graphic sex. I’m fine with some detailed illicit sex scenes, and I’m fine with a few sentences indicating that people have sex. I hate the pace of the story being bogged down with sex scenes. I don’t understand the allure of smut books at all. If you want sex, find a person to share it with. If that is beyond you, watch porn video. Those videos would take many thousands of words to write. >With that preface, I am sure that people can see where this is going. >I don’t typically like super hero books, but I do very much like Kurtis’ super hero books. From my preface, I bet you can see why they are right up my alley. Thanks, Kurtis. >I am losing interest in the Devil’s Harem; it is becoming a smut book. The story pace has turned to a crawl with sex scenes. I liked Combat Healer better because more effort was established into setting the world mechanics and plot. The beginning of the story, for instance the first dungeon delve with the queen, was good. However, this story seems to be degenerating into a smut book too. >So, how do you get Combat Healer back on track? 1) Stop adding more women to fuck into the mix! 2) Get the harem together. I know the story provided some reasons for splitting up the group, but I still don’t like it. Primal Conjurer by Danny Rogan (usually good or very good books) provides an example of a harem facing an extinction-level event as a challenge. 3) Start injecting more family and team work aspects. 4) decrease the number of fully detailed sex scenes and make sure more plot is in each chapter. >Let the team work as one to get rid of the current menace. Allister can take over the continent and then the world. After that, he can continue to accumulate power until, when he is ready, he can ascend to godhood and join the female god that is powering his miracles. >Really, I see no limit to what Allister can achieve at this point. Allister can destroy armies by himself now. His power becomes even more so when including the fanatically loyal Wren. Then combine his efforts with the rest of his harem, an SSS-class queen, legendary weapons, etc. Yeh, they should be able to handle things. >It would be nice to create a cast of characters as a file – particularly for huge harems like Devil’s Harem and Combat Healer. >There is too much text in italics. Italics should be used sparingly and is typically used for emphasis. Italics is more difficult to read than the standard typeface.
Creative Amoeba
2024-09-28 00:52:01 +0000 UTCI'd like to see the story return to action and intrigue. Rather than a hostile takeover - it would be interesting to wage a war of intelligence between the nations. Similar to the financial attack that is happening, it would be good to leverage some of the skills of Allie's team to retaliate in ways that would not instigate a physical war. Get the Eldridge out of the way and use subterfuge and psychological warfare on them. Using the dungeon to travel secretly makes it possible to place and stage people and thanks to create confusion and implicate the evil leaders. Watching them crumble under the pressure of a psychological war is much more satisfying. His team would also need to identify incoming psychological attacks and counter the impact on their team and Kingdom. It would also be good to see more of Allie's peers and adventurer teams involved in guerilla warfare actions, both protecting their kingdom and helping execute the bigger intelligence war. Allie has been largely reactive over the last few chapters, so seeing him respond more strategically and with a larger purpose would allow for more depth of storyline. His team now has an extensive list of skills to leverage and he has a list of allies who now trust him even more. There are a number of sub-threads that need to be followed related to his current harem, so rather than adding more, it would be good to see them finding allies and building alliances from within the enemy stronghold, while trying to unravel the threads. We still haven't seen the full strategic mind of the Greater Eldritch so that could also be a powerful future plot. Having Allie and Queen Eliza engaged in a chess-like battle of the minds against a powerful Greater Eldritch, each moving their teams to attack our defend on the battlefield. In some cases, it would also be interesting to see them lose some battles to win the bigger war.
HapiCpl
2024-06-10 14:16:09 +0000 UTCId like to see all of Allie's women meet, and seeing an official team formed would be awesome. I'd like to see Allie push to really work on the info the Goddess passed to him, and how to apply that to himself and his women and/or team; I think it would be awesome to see strange and powerful new things happen with spells, skills, classes, and reaching new thresholds. I like Hailey as well, she's a keeper. Good chapter
Jonathan Depenau
2024-05-02 04:47:56 +0000 UTCLiked the chapter, didn't mind the Blake and Marta scene. I'm not sure about the succubus character, for me, this story is a little more serious then idh, which is a little more whimsical. I really like the backstory of the new character Hailey, and that she drains essence but I figured it would be a banshee or similar entity. I think my main problem is that her race is a little 2D. I don't mind what happened, but the number of women he's collecting is getting up there, and at some point people will realize he isn't a normal healer. He still has to flee, or hostile takeover the kingdom (which he's significantly on the way to doing. He has to take care of the uggo which is possibly an elder eldritch or similar and he also needs to take care of the king. Then redoing his group and catch everyone up.
Moi465
2024-05-01 00:54:02 +0000 UTCAnd are you tying in Allister being Kai?
J Bone
2024-04-30 22:12:17 +0000 UTCI think some overall regrouping is in order. Allister with all of his women in one room. I know that can't happen with him dealing with everything at the castle.
J Bone
2024-04-30 22:11:36 +0000 UTCOooo, I didn't get a notification so i only just noticed the chapter drop.
Moi465
2024-04-29 21:44:08 +0000 UTCThere will be some similarities, but not exactly the same. For one, the fundamental origin will be a lot different.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-04-29 16:39:24 +0000 UTCSecond this. Are you planning on Turning Hailey’s character into a similar type of succubus as found in IDH?
Anexi27
2024-04-29 07:45:30 +0000 UTCNot a bad chapter. Little too much of the sex scene. Would much prefer more of the actual story progression than this last chapter provided.
Dem0n Hunter
2024-04-29 05:05:22 +0000 UTCTwo words sum it up I guess, relationship development, and PAYBACK! Thats my vote for the direction I'd like to see.
Rhys
2024-04-28 23:14:18 +0000 UTCWell, happy day. I'm curious to see whether Allister seeks to act against the kingdom in whole or simply dispose of the knights or whether he seeks wisdom/advice from the Queen. As well, I'm curious how things with the Queen and Wren pan out.
Silent Count
2024-04-28 23:02:08 +0000 UTC
