Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 151 (BOOK 11)
Added 2024-04-20 23:38:56 +0000 UTCApril 20, 2024
NOTE: This chapter is the start of Book 11, and so it has a recap that summarizes the last day in the story. I do this for every 15 chapters.
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Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-06-17 01:35:44 +0000 UTCThe websites giving me some problems the refresh part works fine but I have light grey text with a very bright white background that remains the same no matter if I'm in light or dark mode it's essentially unreadable the background is so bright compared to the text
ReadingRed
2024-06-16 21:31:18 +0000 UTCThis chapter was too full of fluff. Nearly nothing was about the story but a recap of the previous stories. My opinion it was a waste of time. You almost always do better than this. Quite disappointed in this one.
Dem0n Hunter
2024-05-05 22:06:21 +0000 UTCSome interesting ideas. Thanks for the input!
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-05-04 14:58:24 +0000 UTCa few things. first (and I'm not sure if I posted it earlier), but one thing I'm concerned about is how Joseph will feel about losing Rachel and Laura. Sure, Rachel and Laura are joining him of their own free will, but how will Joseph feel about his 'ally' taking his women? On that note, I do think Joseph needs to tear into Kai a little. Something like "You've gone of and fought several times, and not once did you contact me as backup. What good am I as an ally if you don't use me?" Or something like that. Second is the recap as a matter of timing. I think from a narrative perspective, the recap could be doing double duty as explaining to Rachel and Laura what happened. Third, the format of being like a slice of life, where each chapter is roughly an hour or so (depending on the action in that hour. Several hours went by during one chapter during Kai's shield spell training, simply because nothing was happening). It would work in some cases (and even works in this story sometimes). But for an epic like this, it sort of doesn't work. That black stone, for example, was first revealed WAY back in Chapter 19, it was read in Chapter 106, and we STILL haven't met Eve yet. I'll concede that even if it were sped up, it still couldn't have been read immediately anyway if you wanted to keep the story intact. Sort of reminds me how the EA Civil War was put on the back burner during the Shadow War in Babylon 5. The only reason I even bring this up is because you've introduced another MAJOR plot point a few chapters ago, and I sort of don't want to wait another 150 chapters before they get to Egypt. But again, Cairo is on the back burner because Kai's school and atleast trying to avoid suspicion from the other Incubi are more important. And finally, one last thing. How would a Succubus/Incubus child work? Succubi give birth to females, and while not outright stated as clearly, a strong implication is that Incubi only give birth to boys. Maybe Kai's and Miriam's child would be a Sincubus, a futanari with the powers of both inccubi and succubi?
Edward Collins
2024-04-30 22:10:15 +0000 UTCI think Raegan will probably be brought into Kai's family circle, though perhaps not sexually. We already have several succubi including Delilah, Miriam, Rebecca, Gabriella and Kelsey (whom we have barely met). I'm thinking Kai might end up setting her up with an ally like Roland or Mr. Watson, or even Nick. Yes, it would have to be an ally he's given his blood to but I think it's doable. That is assuming Mr. KW doesn't have a grand plan, and he might. But it seems tricky trying to keep 1/3 of the harem unique and fresh from the other half dozen succubi.
Christopher Miller
2024-04-26 02:29:05 +0000 UTCThere is probably a lot to unpack there as far as the Mr. Copeland/Reagan relationship. It sounds like after sex Michelle's STBXH did indeed become addicted to Raegan, like Kai did to Rebecca. Although before sex occurred he probably only had a strong physical attraction to her. Which means, he's still a human PoS, because he had a family, including an incredibly attractive, and sexually adventurous life partner, whom he was willing to throw away.
Christopher Miller
2024-04-22 13:59:45 +0000 UTC💗 I'd like to know more of the new Succubus- Damsel and her Mom. And for Mr. Copeland I need to know if Raegan was the only one and what her Powers did or did not. 😍
Chris M.
2024-04-21 17:23:52 +0000 UTCOuch, rough situation. It's easy to imagine that any male who's displayed any strong intent toward her in the past has turned out to be bad news. Her fear makes perfect sense, even if she doesn't know the cause of the correlation. And that kind of thing isn't easy to overcome. His sense of urgency will tend to be pretty massively misinterpreted. I just really want to see this work out for her. The abusive power-plays Mr. Copeland are throwing around are seriously eww, even considering the extenuating circumstances due to the whole addiction thing. His actions are still fundamentally his own responsibility.
Tejing
2024-04-21 15:03:28 +0000 UTCChapter was fine, I forgot about the recapping. Fair that she's scared though, he reaction was pretty natural, he's just coming off like a weirdo with a savior complex lol.
Moi465
2024-04-21 03:44:24 +0000 UTCYou kinda said the same thing twice "And they’d faithfully taken care of the duties assigned to them when I was literally at my weakest. If they wished me ill will, they could have easily done so when I was at my weakest!".
Moi465
2024-04-21 03:06:52 +0000 UTCThanks for the new chapter, trying to engage more with Authors so trying to comment more and give feedback and throw out some ideas/throughts. (Don't feel pressured by them or anything like that). Been a while since Nick has shown up in the story interacting with Kai on screen. (Nick did have Serenity say hi not too many chapters ago) So maybe we'll see him with the Moon drama where Eve hasn't been given the blood yet and potentially attack Nick and Kai having to give blood/heal to add him as a full Ally. Potentially even setting Reagan and Nick up if kai's "blessing" allows Nick to be unharmed by Succubus feeding. Or even Reagan with Roland/Joseph. Don't want to put too big of a message so I'll end with saying thanks for the work you put in the story :D (sorry for grammar/spelling)
Adub
2024-04-21 02:34:34 +0000 UTC
