Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 144
Added 2024-02-11 02:08:35 +0000 UTCFebruary 10, 2024
NOTE: I need to do some plotting on Combat Healer, so here is another IDH chapter. It’s finally a steamy one, so hope you enjoy (a lot of you have been asking for it).
Also, here is Gwen’s outfit in this chapter (a latex bodysuit with latex maid outfit).
Screenshot of Gwen from the Game:
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Comments
Too much meandering internal thoughts. It seemed he was having shower sex, started thinking a bunch about the women he wasnt with at the time, then with no transition had moved on to another group.
oldntokn
2024-05-15 01:02:50 +0000 UTCHonestly, this really seems to be more 'filler' than anything else. In SciFi/Fantasy erotica, even harem stories, I find detailed sex scenes to be useful mostly in early chapters to draw in the reader and give emotional weight to the character relationships. But later, they just become either repetitive, over the top (see the absurd 'fisting train', that was referenced in this chapter), or emotionally vacant. These group sessions neither move the plot forward nor the emotional connections to the characters.If there needs to be a sex scene, I'd much rather it had been a one-on-one with Avery. No one should be introduced to sex the way Avery has been. She's really been treated like crap. All group sex, without even recently dealing with her supposed kink about wanting her Mom to take her boyfriend. She's just been turned into a generic 'sub' for anyone, when she started as having strong 'romantic' potential.
William L
2024-04-02 20:55:13 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter it's been a long time coming.
SovietDegendays
2024-02-12 16:30:44 +0000 UTCThe mental talk is a feature of this type of story and of this story in particular. I agree it can sometimes be a bit excessive. But I enjoyed this chapter as a bridging chapter.
Florida Reader
2024-02-12 07:44:41 +0000 UTCWell done.
Florida Reader
2024-02-12 07:30:17 +0000 UTCI didn't recall reading that they could have more then one infinity. Could their supernatural connection play apart.
The Archer
2024-02-11 21:34:07 +0000 UTCI keep forgetting that I've written the next chapter of Wolfgirl, and just haven't published it yet. A LOT of the questions you have about Liz and Bethel would probably be answered if I posted that chapter.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-02-11 19:22:03 +0000 UTCThat's an interesting idea, and something I should probably address eventually.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-02-11 19:21:19 +0000 UTCYep. Just wanted to get past that part, so we could get on with the rest of the chapter.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-02-11 19:19:43 +0000 UTCOkay, I've added information about that topic (hope it answers your questions): (Starting here...) The two beds were still put together from the previous night when I slept with Elizabeth, Serenity, Gabriella, Avery, and Natalie. (Adding these paragraphs...) I knew the gold butt-plug was something that Gwen used mainly out of habit at this point, having much better control over her body temperature now. Really, she’d gained quite a bit of control over her body temperature when I first ‘claimed her’ after dying and resurrecting, but it was obvious that receiving my blood made a huge difference. To the point that she could probably truly go without, even if her body was definitely warmer than a normal person. However, she was so used to having the thick metal shoved up her ass, having lived like that for literally decades, that it felt more comfortable to have it in, than not. And she also knew I found it ridiculously hot knowing she always had it shoved up her ass. It added an extra layer of sexiness, especially in situations like right now. (And then, this comes after...) Getting into the hallway just as Gwen reached the room...
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-02-11 19:19:11 +0000 UTCEver since Kai bonded with her, and especially ever since Kai gave his blood to her, she's had more and more control over her heat naturally. She technically doesn't need it anymore, but continues to use it anyway. It basically just isn't using up magic like it used to. Edit: I may need to mention that in this chapter to remind people.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-02-11 17:43:32 +0000 UTCYou need to start a offshoot, called inner ramblings of a Devil, and make it optional reading. Half of this chapter was mind numbing and then aggravating as fuck. Seeing as how most if not all of his rambling, was only useful to someone who hasn't read anything up until this chapter
Mocmo
2024-02-11 17:03:48 +0000 UTCI enjoyed the scenes, but got confused on one point -- with the plug removed from Gwen, how did she prevent herself from going supernova? It is definitely nice to see Rosa joining the club -- further proving to me that his tier system is somewhat meaningless.
Florida Reader
2024-02-11 17:03:36 +0000 UTCI am still curious as to who you will end up pair Claire with. My vote has and will be Claire,Avery and Rosa. Or Claire,Avery and Nat.
Stanley Rish Jr
2024-02-11 16:51:16 +0000 UTCPlus since it seems like it's possible to have more than one affinity is it going to be possible to merge some of these bonds? For example, it seems like as a hellhound Natalie has a secondary fire affinity, as do most of the succubi since they give off and have a high tolerance for scalding temperatures. So, will Natalie eventually be able to bond with Serenity and Gwen in a secondary bond? Will this end up connecting most of the girls directly to most of the other girls other than using Kai as a hub?
Christopher Miller
2024-02-11 16:25:03 +0000 UTCThis whole focus on affinities has got me thinking again, dangerous, I know😛. Does Elizabeth have the fire affinity because she shares a body with Bethel, a fire spirit? If so, when they separate will she have a different affinity, like the blood affinity? Or does she have the fire affinity on her own? Will she be able to enter a full bond with Bethel while they share a body, or will they have to be separated first?
Christopher Miller
2024-02-11 16:16:44 +0000 UTCWell, since Serenity & Gabriella didn't meet until years after her parents died I don't believe there was a plan in place to connect them. Although, I could easily believe that Serenity could have been drawn to a succubus (most people would be), and Gabriella could have been unconsciously drawn to Ren due her having traces of Kai's scent on her from them living together. Plus there's the fact that Serenity and Gabriella seem to have a good deal of chemistry between them. They forged a friendship without Kai despite both of them historically having very few true friends.
Christopher Miller
2024-02-11 16:10:35 +0000 UTCUnrelated to this chapter and something I've thought for a bit, although triggered a little by the wife starter pack... Was it just blind luck that Gabriella was friends with Serentiy and fell for Kai, which then allowed the introduction to Miriam, as Gabriella's grandmother, or did Kai give instructions that his and Serenity's parents should encourage that friendship with Gabriella, with the expectation something would develop? Also, thanks for covering off the Rosa / Roland situation immediately 😊.
Itsasecret
2024-02-11 12:45:21 +0000 UTCJust started reading but I love how you cut out boring and needless back and forth with "so I sent him a quick message", he simply said "understood."
Moi465
2024-02-11 03:55:48 +0000 UTC
