Combat Healer Ch. 52
Added 2023-11-27 01:17:53 +0000 UTCNovember 26, 2023
NOTE: Long chapter! (8,700 words! That's only 1,300 words away from being 2 chapters!) Lots happening!
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FEEDBACK: Okay, so things are pretty close to coming full circle, as several dots get connected in the next few chapters. But thoughts so far?
1. Did the 'chemistry' come through?
(When I initially wrote this chapter, I felt like I'd done a good job of communicating the chemistry between Jasmine and Allister, but when I 'edited' it, I wasn't sure that the chemistry came through like how I intended. It's okay if it didn't, but if you did/didn't feel their chemistry, please let me know.)
2. Did you find the end of the 'italics' section emotional? (When Allister showed up at the end)
3. Thoughts on the Shackle Artifact? (And it's powers.) Are you amused by it being possibly sadistic and/or masochistic? Thoughts on anything else?
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Comments
Like, saying “X was the best I’d ever had”. I usually prefer not to have a kind of ranking of women in the harem, like X is better in bed than Y is better than Z. Emphasize that it’s an erotically charged moment, but don’t say that other harem members are less special/admired. Just my opinion though.
whyme943
2024-03-05 04:36:45 +0000 UTCWhen you say 'other way of showing chemistry' are you talking about the ranking women/experiences, or something else? I can't tell if you are referring to something specific in the chapter, like you don't like how the chemistry between Jasmine and Allister played out, or if you just mean in general. Can you elaborate on what you mean?
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-03-05 03:22:51 +0000 UTCI’m not a fan of ranking the women in the harem, or experiences with them. I can deal with it, but I’d prefer if you found some other way of showing the chemistry between characters.
whyme943
2024-03-04 21:39:06 +0000 UTCCombat Healer (CH) continues to be my favorite. Both stories (CH + DH) seem to have very big harems with very powerful main characters. I'm hoping the group gets together soon in CH. By the might of the people that Allister is gathering together, some really bad dudes must be ready to rain on his parade in the future. They would have to be really powerful to stand up to the group he has now... Of course, a pack of hydra/dogs would be very nasty to most creatures. Concerning your questions: Chemistry. It is hard for me to identify with the almost instantaneous relationships that keep happening. Emotional... Probably so, prayer answered when the savior, Allister, appeared. The shackle is a magical item unlike those that I am used to reading about. For that reason, I found it neat and interesting. Otherwise, I didn't think a lot about it.
Creative Amoeba
2024-02-29 02:14:00 +0000 UTCI got a little confused with the time in those parallel timelines. Especially after you wrote somewhere that you did not want to be as realtime with CH like yourt aith IDH.
Carsten
2024-02-28 23:33:34 +0000 UTCThe italicized parts always start with the timeframe, such as 'Present Day' or 'Several Minutes Ago,' etc. In the next chapter, it starts off with 'One Hour Ago,' and then catches us up with what is happening with them over the next couple of chapters.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-02-26 02:27:48 +0000 UTCyes, please. I hope you have, because this thread of the story is missing from my personal view. You tend to go to real time like with IDH here. Which you stated you did not want in this story. Is that the same night as the one when Mel/Val/Lyla holding out with the other teams?
Carsten
2024-02-26 02:16:14 +0000 UTCWell I found that the start was hilarious, I mean the being sealed within the shackle was literally throwing a tantrum like a child when the princess denied submission to it only to get dominated by Allister moments after summoning him. Literally had to do a double and triple take on that one section. I have a feeling Allister was given far more control than the artifact originally wants and is only being stubborn to be feel validated into submission.
Pedro Comenda
2023-11-27 22:38:34 +0000 UTCI will likely be starting the next chapter with checking back in with Mel/Val/Lyla, etc.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2023-11-27 21:47:09 +0000 UTCI thought the chemistry was good, without being over the top. The problem with split location storylines is wanting to know what is going on with the other characters while reading the current scenarios! One thing that I wasn't overly keen on, though, was the shackle being described as masochistic (ignoring the "sadistic" mistakes) - I didn't pick up on any masochistic elements but plenty of submissive, which is more what I'd associate with a shackle than masochistic. Always makes my weekends getting your updates but a nightmare when they are late on a Sunday night as it means I have to wait until after work on Monday to read them
Itsasecret
2023-11-27 20:58:24 +0000 UTCGood catch! Fixed it.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2023-11-27 19:23:52 +0000 UTCThe princess is a great addition to the "team". To lead her people as queen, lessons learned will help make her a good queen. Love the addition of artifacts to go along with skill and attribute advances to the story. I know you had some in already but they can allow you some treasures found to assist characters without learning new spells. Like the bracers being used by one other than its master...great way to eventually keep her safe while MC is away. Great chapter KW. Appreciate you finishing where you did, and not sooner, as felt like a good point to break.
Keepit simple
2023-11-27 15:08:10 +0000 UTCDefinitely good chemistry, coming through clear. Really like the shackle a lot, it's like completely off the hook fucking insane-o weird and powerful. Love it. All of it.. Give me more!
Jonathan Depenau
2023-11-27 15:06:12 +0000 UTCHello, I found "limiting her grow significantly" did you mean "growth"?
Rhys
2023-11-27 12:44:18 +0000 UTCuhh... so we're getting nothing but Combat Healer for the next month, right? right?
Silent Count
2023-11-27 08:20:38 +0000 UTCSheesh what a chapter! Love the shackle/crest going on. Also curse you and ur teasing lol
SovietDegendays
2023-11-27 08:03:12 +0000 UTCSo oddly enough, I accidentally used both in this chapter. The first time I brought it up, I used masochistic (correctly), and then the MC mentioned it again and used sadistic the second time. I don't know what I was thinking, but I fixed it.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2023-11-27 05:39:39 +0000 UTCI think the shackle being sadistic is perfect, it’s an amazing representation of what a shackle is and the thoughts behind it’s creation.
Patrick Briley
2023-11-27 05:24:53 +0000 UTCI'd like to see further development and exploration in this though, if it lends her to becoming more submissive and masochistic and how the shackle/collar would encourage the development.
Moi465
2023-11-27 05:01:04 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter! The chemistry came through. The artifact doesn't seem sadistic....more masochistic given that it wants to be made to obey.
Moi465
2023-11-27 04:59:03 +0000 UTCCan always look forward to a good read when one of your chapters release. Thank you for the great chapter. Personally I think the chemistry was there but I also don't really get social ques so I'm probably not reliable about it. All the same i think it's a great chapter
Thomas Andersen
2023-11-27 03:17:36 +0000 UTC
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