Combat Healer Ch. 51
Added 2023-11-20 00:00:23 +0000 UTCNovember 19, 2023
NOTE: Thank you guys for being patient with this chapter. You can't rush 'quality' and this chapter has hopefully turned out to be the definition of quality (the exact thing you're here for -- a good original story that does things you haven't seen before).
Hope you enjoy!
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FEEDBACK: Thoughts?
I have been planning out the whole 'Shackle Guardian' thing for well over a year now, and the next chapter will hopefully be amazing and the 'icing' on this redhead princess cake.
That being said, most of the things in this chapter are 'brand new' (including all the items introduced).
As in, I had no idea what was going to be in this chapter until this past week, and if I had tried to rush this chapter then it probably would have turned about crappy, to say the least (ideas are hard to develop when things are rushed). For example, I knew that Blake's mom had something in her hand, but had ZERO idea what it was, or how it affected the plot, until I plotted out this chapter.
And I very well would have 'overlooked' this opportunity, if I'd been in a rush.
Thankfully, I had the time to sit down and 'take my time' working out the plot for this chapter and a few of the ones coming up, and that makes a big difference in the quality of the chapter.
Anyway, what did you think?
1. Thoughts on princess Shackle Artifact? Guardian Summoning power?
2. Thoughts on Remi and Blake conversation? Or MC summoning to save the day?
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Comments
Hi, I liked this chapter and will read again later today. I like the Guardian for the Princess. I think the BLake/Remi conversation opened up the story furhter more. I see some issue with the numbers in the Harem. In IDH you stopped at 9 or 10 (problems counting correctly) and asked for who we want to see. We are now past that point in this story with number of Harem members(Mel, Val, Angel, Eliza, Frosty, Celine, Aster, Wren, Princess, Blake, Remi). I also liked the fertility mark stuff as a solution to race incompatibility.
Carsten
2024-01-29 01:10:03 +0000 UTCThat’s was dope especially when jasmine got the artifact although im kind of confused by it rn but im assuming that’s the point also hated leaving Blake and remi in the dungeon
Javier Delafuente
2024-01-22 05:22:41 +0000 UTCSo glad you think so!
Author Kaizer Wolf
2023-11-20 10:19:23 +0000 UTCOk that was a hype chapter
SovietDegendays
2023-11-20 10:07:52 +0000 UTCYeah, the fertility mark thing is something I'm looking forward to writing about. For the long-term plot, I want the MC to be able to have kids with Mel one day, and this was an interesting way to make that possible (since Oni/human mating usually isn't possible).
Author Kaizer Wolf
2023-11-20 09:40:20 +0000 UTCGlad you liked it! And yeah, the MC is a bit reluctant right now to take advantage of this opportunity, partially due to the danger, but he will soon learn some key information that will allow him to feel comfortable utilizing it.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2023-11-20 09:36:42 +0000 UTCAli having a large castle with his Harem and children running around would be cool. Plus he has a dungeon now. He truly went from zero to hero.
J Bone
2023-11-20 09:17:19 +0000 UTCFertility mark harem is hot. Need some art done of that for sure. Also the next chapter can't come out soon enough
Zaralith
2023-11-20 02:55:29 +0000 UTCIndeed, I do. I back only two creators on this platform. And I am here for Combat Healer.
Silent Count
2023-11-20 01:09:38 +0000 UTCVery good really like the summoning and the fact that MC can go back a forth to his own 'private' dungeon and learn about eldritch eyes and maybe the source of power for the dungeon
David Russo
2023-11-20 00:35:30 +0000 UTCGreat chapter
Thotimusprime
2023-11-20 00:32:56 +0000 UTCYou... Rejoice? Hopefully? Lol.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2023-11-20 00:08:15 +0000 UTCWhen you get the notification....
Silent Count
2023-11-20 00:06:02 +0000 UTC
