Innocent Devil’s Harem Ch. 132
Added 2023-09-16 20:05:11 +0000 UTCSeptember 16, 2023
NOTE: This chapter ends with a cliffhanger, and I'm absolutely not sorry!
It's 8,300 words (which is only 1,700 words away from basically being two chapters in one).
Hope you enjoy!
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Comments
Good catch! I fixed it.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-03-25 00:51:57 +0000 UTCMoot is correct, yes. I fixed it.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-03-25 00:51:14 +0000 UTCGood catch! I'll fix it.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2024-03-25 00:35:17 +0000 UTCI must be reading these stories too late at night as I am often confused. I guess it doesn't help that I don't always get to read things in one sitting. With all this reading each other's mind, I sometimes forget where Kai's body actually is. I mean it is a neat idea, but it certainly requires me to pay attention. I personally would prefer a little less of that. Then I am confused about how Kai is handling the nurse. It seems like he is worried about magically influencing her, yet is using her to provide housing for Claire? Did I get that right? Then there is Claire. He is worried and wants to build an army - not sure why. He gave blood to his half-brother and women not directly under his control to empower them. ...And then there is this pretty precog that he is not sure he wants on his team? Who else is a precog?
Creative Amoeba
2023-12-06 13:45:36 +0000 UTCThat's not a cliffhanger...you wanna do a cliffhanger right, you end it when Trey's still running towards Avery, coach is trying to intercede, and Avery's just gone down with a twisted ankle 😁 Great installment!
Toodles McGhee
2023-12-04 14:01:52 +0000 UTCfound a small typo. When Serenity is discussing being a gift for Kai, you have mute instead of moot.
Edward Collins
2023-09-20 18:08:07 +0000 UTCCould have some artifact that protects him from sunlight?
Pedro Comenda
2023-09-19 06:21:29 +0000 UTCClaire is going to need some blood to survive and heal. Will be nice for Kai to have a gf with ability to see future, though I wouldn't want one lol
Keepit simple
2023-09-18 16:32:38 +0000 UTCLove the story. Honestly confused on why the hospital nurse is getting so much story time... I hope she's going to be an important character and not just filler. And like many others have said, trey is hiding something. Claire read him like a book. With her insight letting her see into what his dad and him do to girls. Hope Avery doesn't get into trouble with the police. And I hope they can save Claire from death.
J Bone
2023-09-17 22:05:57 +0000 UTCI’m just curious what town they live in that has so many super natural beings in it! Does make sense that Trey has some extra abilities if he’s that good an athlete. I assume Claire knows about his father from her premonitions. Further, it would seem she has a broken neck and will need Kai’s blood which could come back to the painting. His hand is her saving grace not her doom. I’m worried for Avery though because the story will now have brought the law into the picture. Trey’s injuries will be too great to ignore I would think, given his heart stopped. It seems to me Avery will have some difficult explaining to do, but perhaps Kai can get out there and compel the police? Maybe Serenity can help as well. One other question was if you meant to use the word “mute” when Serenity was speaking. Or did you mean “moot”?
Alice Duffield
2023-09-17 17:52:20 +0000 UTCYou wrote: "‘Kai, it doesn’t even matter now,’ Serenity continued. ‘Even if I was compelled to not date other guys, the effect is *mute* now. Pointless, even. Because now I would absolutely not choose to date a different guy.’" The word to use is *moot*. Sorry, this kind of wrong word in an idiom is a pet peeve of mine. You're doing great work, I love this series.
TM
2023-09-17 17:42:36 +0000 UTCCan’t be vampire, he’s out in the sunlight. Could be werewolf since his Dad seems to be the alpha pulling the strings. Possibly some other demon form with an illusion up. Could even be some type of demigod or something.
James Clausi
2023-09-17 17:13:56 +0000 UTCFor some reason, I feel that Trey and his father are not fully human as well...possibly werewolves??? Or maybe even vampires...oh the possibilities lol
J N
2023-09-17 11:32:44 +0000 UTCWell it wasn't necessarily to punish anyone, lol. It was more like 'this is going to be intense,' and I'm not sorry. But I do appreciate the comment. Trust me, you being a supporter for over 2 years now speaks volume on it's own! Thanks!
Author Kaizer Wolf
2023-09-17 01:27:41 +0000 UTCWow great chapter I like that Avery got some revenge I hope Clare is going to be alright. But that stirs up the big pot. Trey and his dad are going to cause problems. What a creep
Robert Crews
2023-09-16 23:51:04 +0000 UTCAbout time trey got put in his place. Definitely going to have a broken ego after getting wrecked by a girl so effortlessly. Nice job.
Pedro Comenda
2023-09-16 22:30:35 +0000 UTCThanks for continuing to do this story, bit of a brutal cliffhanger but probably deserved for a lot of us who just silently support and read without commenting or very often. Spiced up the story and anticipation for the next chapter.
Adub
2023-09-16 22:10:44 +0000 UTC
