Combat Healer Ch. 44
Added 2023-07-29 13:28:26 +0000 UTCJuly 29, 2023
NOTE: I've managed to get a decent amount of plotting done (at least for the next 8 to 10 chapters I think), and hopefully I'll be taking this story in some directions you aren't expecting (not necessarily with the content of this particular chapter, but for future chapters).
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- CHAPTER 44: Focus -
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FEEDBACK: Thoughts? Obviously this chapter was pretty straight forward with the plot, but things will hopefully get very interesting in the next few chapters.
Thoughts on the whole 'Poor Man's Focus Ritual' thing? (Was it explained well enough to be believable, especially the reason why it wasn't common and why it might be considered undesirable to most? etc.)
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Comments
I give it 1 star for having to go to a different site thats harder to read because of the small font and color scheme.
Durdens Wrath
2025-03-11 04:54:56 +0000 UTCMinor typo: someone who was potentially going to give into a crazy request. (...give in to...)
Keith Huntington
2023-10-01 20:23:38 +0000 UTCIn how he helped his team mate is was more about guiding behavior to unlock and improve what was there. It sounds like you need a “mana” infusion to break through the focus lock.
Webstersponge
2023-08-06 00:56:19 +0000 UTCMaybe you can help me figure out how I clarify better, but there is a difference between seeing skills and stats, such as seeing that someone is 39 out of 40 total points, -- versus -- being able to actually cause someone's limits to be broken so that they are now 39/50 (instead of 39/40) and can go up an additional 10 levels in their stats.
Author Kaizer Wolf
2023-07-30 15:32:04 +0000 UTCJust wondering why wouldn't Allie be able to perform a focus ritual on his own the normal way instead of paying someone else to do it? I thought as an essence diviner he was capable of performing focus rituals himself, but chose not to because of the attention it would bring him? His being able to discern a person's skills, focus and class and then help them find out how to properly use (unlocking them) is what Allie basically just did. Why can't he personally take it one step further to fully unlock Blake's focus by himself?
Christopher Miller
2023-07-30 15:12:40 +0000 UTCI just really think it’s a matter of perspective, I mean I would have reacted like allister if someone told me that because of how uncommon it is, after all, he never thought about doing such things because he’s lived in a place where those kinds of services aren’t practiced. It’s understandable if he just takes what he’s heard for a grain of salt, but his character you’ve built wouldn’t let him do that so he might be willing to try.
Pedro Comenda
2023-07-30 06:24:07 +0000 UTCWhat if I added the concept of: "If you heal someone who doesn't need healing, then what effect would that have?" and relate it to the concept of "infusing someone with excessive essence to break through their limitations" -- Or is the issue the 'sex' part?
Author Kaizer Wolf
2023-07-30 01:46:01 +0000 UTCIt was explained extremely well but still sounds unbelievable, and I can still think of different ways to explain to which doesn’t make it any more believable, then again, this is a world with monsters and magic within a system so who knows.
Pedro Comenda
2023-07-29 21:56:14 +0000 UTCSheesh great chapter need the next one asap!
SovietDegendays
2023-07-29 14:29:46 +0000 UTC
