Poll to touch base!
Added 2025-12-12 12:11:38 +0000 UTCHIVEMIND(ED) FOCUSSED! YOU CAN VOTE MULTIPLE TIMES!
Okay, had quite a few patrons leave recently and the last page (as an attempt to inject smut) wasn't received very well, so I think my storytelling is getting out of whack.
Let me know any scruples that you have with Hivemind(ed). There are some options to choose from below, but please voice your opinions inside or outside of the options too, it'll help me improve and produce better content for you, after all.
I do have key plot points that I will have to finish/ explain now, but it may just be the case that I've made a complex plot that has inevitably led to a lot of exposition being needed. After we get over this hurdle things should be moving much faster.
I'll upload another page a bit later today or tomorrow, but I'm also working on a synopsis of what has been covered so far to detail what has transpired in the story.
Comments
I… really don’t have an issue with the pacing or the dialogue. I think it’s much easier to catch on once the entire scene + exposition plays out, but even then I’m fine with following along, update to update. Slow paced TF, medium pacedTF, and fast paced TF all scratch different itches and I like the your storytelling and your style. Experiment how you like according to what feedback you get but I hope you know that your work is great!
Mach
2025-12-12 17:55:38 +0000 UTCit a little to confsing cause i feel like i miss some impotant plot point between panels
dutchblizzard
2025-12-12 14:40:43 +0000 UTC
