Hi Patrons!
This week I finally have the scenario for the trilogy of episode 27, 28 and 29. The hardest part was to find funny end-twist for each episodes and 'cut' the episodes into panels to fit the short format Pepper&Carrot.

For writing, I used the Ghostwriter. I really like this software for writing. I simply keep one line per panel. Ghostwriter improves my focus on writing with the ease of the Markdown format and the quick interactive rendering it has of the Markdown. I like the way I could customize the theme too. Another little feature I like about it: you can rename the filename from the File menu. Other text editor I have like Geany or Kate propose only to 'Save As' to enter a new filename and then you need to open your filemanager manually to delete the previous filename...
It's also the first time I work on three episodes at the same time and the main benefit is to be able to work on the continuity between the scenes and places where the characters are evolving. But I also worked on keeping the episodes 'stand-alone' (in case a new reader fall on episode 28, it should also 'work' as a gag without needing the context).
All in all, that's a lot of constrains and I had to work on a lot of revisions (for episode 27, I wrote 8 different stories!). That was necessary to find the good balance and not get a weak episode compare to the two others.

The future stories will happen in Qualicity and I'm doing now a bit of concept-art before making a cleaned storyboard for the contributors and proofreader of the story development on our collaborative tool Framagit.
I'll have to redraw, because right now, only me can understand my notes:

So my goal is to storyboard now the three episodes as I did for "episode 23: Take a Chance". The rendering for the storyboard of this episode was half way between a storyboard and a drawing step and this rendering really helped to plan the episode correctly and get good feedback from community of proofreader. I want to reproduce this experience.

But unfortunately, I'm a bit stuck by a Krita bug to enter text in speechbubble on my storyboard... This afternoon, I tested other solution and workaround for that: GIMP, AZPainter ...without success. I'll probably have to use an old appimage of Krita 3.x ; or see if I can work the storyboard with Krita and Inkscape. I'll let you know.
Concept-art are also appearing since I finished writing and twisting my brain. I'm working on a quick illustration to give news on social network and the blog. Here is a sketch of it, I'll color it maybe while I'll do the black and white storyboard. I'll need a bit of colors on the evenings :)

That's all; next week, I hope I'll have storyboard pages to show you, and why not, to share the first pages of episode 27 here too.
Have a good week-end all, and thank you for your support!
David Revoy
2018-09-26 08:06:33 +0000 UTCDavid Revoy
2018-09-25 08:49:19 +0000 UTC