I stuck almost 100% to my storyboard for this. I feel like this chapter’s thumbnails are particularly messy, like I couldn‘t wait to get it out. The last two pages weren‘t in the script, I added them when I was almost done with the line art for the whole scene. I just felt like cutting on the page before them would‘ve been a bit too abrupt.
My intention with the last two pages was to kind of... let it sink in? And to not show Leon‘s face/reaction, instead you have to interpret it by interpreting Gilbert‘s face seeing Leon‘s expression. Double interpretation. Idk if that came across.
“Part 1” because the chapter has more pages coming up. I would've said with 82 pages in total it's the longest chapter by far but guess what... now that I'm on chapter 16, I know that's not the case.