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WIP Nicole/Belle Comic pages 1-5 (first half)

Hey everyone, I hope you all are keeping and doing well!!

Here's the first five pages roughed out for the upcoming comic! The original idea was to have them exchanging pictures that got progressively more lewd and revealing until they eventually ended up meeting up for some late night fun but alas I was struggling with trying to get that to work without rushing towards that end (ruining the pacing) nor without going over ten pages. It's my fault though since I just really like doing a build up if that makes any sense. The anticipation of it all makes the end all the more sweeter... but in doing so that means my comic are like — half fluff and slowburn lmao. ( ˶>˶˶<˶)

So now the idea is to just pivot to Belle and Nicole sexting for the remaining five and if I play my cards right they can meet up on that final page for some fun in Nicole's car. That was the original plan, but truthfully I don't really want to have that be only one page.

Perhaps I can just add a larger piece after those ten pages which shows them having some late night fun in said car and said piece can stand on it's own even while also serving to be a grand finale to this little comic? I'll go back to the drawing board and figure it out, and you all will be the first to know once I do and once I've drawn it! ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧

Enough with my bloviating explanations lol, I just thought it would be best to share this first half while I go back to working on a different take for the second half since I loathe going too long without posting or sharing anything here, truthfully. (..◜ᴗ◝..)

Thank you all so much as always for your patience and your support! ♡

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Weird but honest question. What would you recommend for a starting artist because you are becoming an inspiration

VulpineGunslinger

Belle Nicole Belle Nicole Belle Nicole Belle Nicole Belle Nicole Belle Nicole Lol that's been my brain the entire time i've been planning out and working on this comic. Jests aside thank you for being so excited and for the kind words — with longer form projects like this I try to put more thought into my pages; especially since i'm doing my best to make sure I don't go over ten pages given there's alot I want to convey and limited space to do so. The paneling is a wonderfully fun challenge to tackle though!! There's not alot of reference material for the base of the cunning hares, but with what I could find they seem to rely on natural lighting (saving the energy bill) and have a decent amount of functional clutter like books under a coffee tables leg to make it more sturdy. I'm still ironing out what Nicole's bedroom in particular might look like but I think she would be the type to use candles and incense... or perhaps i'm projecting lmao. Thank you for seeing the vision also! I was very much so going for the vibe that they both keep sending each other riskier and riskier photos almost like some unspoken contest that just ends up into the two of them falling into a FWB situation. I'm also so relieved and happy to hear that I captured their personalities well! Admittedly I studied their previous knock knock interactions to try and get their vernacular and affectations down. You're patience and lengthy replies mean a lot so ty and pls take care!! (*ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈)

Djang0Art

(*ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈) Thank you so very much, that really eases my mind and is very kind of you to say. I grew up reading comics and manga and I hope that such inspirations are prominent in my work ◝(ᵔᗜᵔ)◜

Djang0Art

Thank you for the kind words Bear, and thank you again for your input! I'll make sure they get to actually gave fun with each other before the comic ends. (ㅅ´ ˘ `)

Djang0Art

Belle Nicole Belle Nicole Belle Nicole Belle Nicole Belle Nicole Belle Nicole Belle Nicole Belle Nicoleokay I'll stop but imagine there's a few pages of that. Belle Nicole comic! I've been waiting so long for this! I am SO pumped. And just to see another long form comic from you, of course. I've always loved your creative paneling most of all, and it's at its most prominent in your longer-form work. Per memory we never see Nicole's room in-game. I imagine it kinda cluttered and messy-organized, with different (super-fashionable) outfits on every available surface except the tiny vanity. Or maybe it's a "girl, you live like this?" situation? haha. I'm psyched to see your imagination of what it would look like! Competitive thirst traps...very fitting for this pair. Their relationship would definitely be based around repeated escalations and tit-for-tat. And of course you've got Nicole's characterization down as well. Flirtatious and teasing, but the outward confidence is a projection to cover her inner self-doubt. And similarly for all of Nicole's apparent avariciousness and competitiveness her real desires are a lot simpler: the safety and comfort of her loved ones (and herself, obviously). I think her favorite thing to do once she got past all the competitiveness would just be to chill with Belle and actually like, relax instead of the nonstop hustle. Belle is definitely a girl who says bruh. I know the 10(plus??) page comics take -forever- so please pace yourself, we can be patient! I promise I can be patient (╥﹏╥)

Nost

This is looking so good, I can't wait to see where you take it! I think you have an excellent sense for pacing when it comes to the way you write sexual tension in your comics, so I feel like it's good to trust your gut on that one!

⧨ 𝐌𝐀𝐖 ⧨

I'm already looking forward to it! Personally I think keeping the Climax (so to speak) as the last page of the comic would be better, keeps it all neatly together, as oppossed to when they meet up and ending the comic before it gets actually steamy and then adding a seperate piece to it- at least in my opinion.

Bearquisitor


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