Comedy gym

Hey everyone!

This week I realized that there was a bit of comedy lacking in the wrestler's story. So I've changed the script a bit to be able to introduce some more humorous scenes.

Comedy gym

The story stays the same till the point that Keen realizes he's pretty out of breath after building the gym. But from there it changes a bit; for Tonda will now invite Keen to come train at the gym to get back into shape. And this allows me to show Keen doing all sorts of exercises, and failing at them...which should be interesting! Meanwhile the girls will of course still be showing their exersises- but now as an example for Keen.

I only just planned out the scenes in my notebook- and haven't detailed the sketches yet, but maybe you can already see where I'm going with this? :)

Left page, from top to bottom: 

1. Keen falls over trying to lift a halterbar.
2. Keen gets tangled up while rope skipping.
3. Keen running on the treadmill -thinking he did great, but just 1 minute passed.
4. A calender losing pages showing that time passes. 

Right page, from top to bottom:

5. The text is where I try to pull together the different parts of the story.
6. Keen wearing an 80's suit at the gym ( Fun, but I'd probably have to redraw dozens of poses...so I'm not sure if I can use that idea).   

Well, there is a bit more story to all this- but that you have to discover in game :)

Keen opening a bottle of oil 

Now the idea to add a bit of comedy was actually sparked by this pose-sequence below.

Here Keen tries to open a bottle of oil for Neeva, so she can oil up before her wrestle match. But of course things don't go exactly as planned. I really like these small animations, and will try to make similar animations for Keens exercises.

   
Drawing these poses is also fairly easy by now. Maybe it's because I like seeing Keen in these akward situations? :)

Well, I hope you like the turn I took! Meanwhile I'm also working still on Neeva's extra long sex scene, and I'll be sharing more on that that in my next post.


 All the best!
-Robin