Unexpected Additions Mk 1
Added 2024-03-10 12:00:03 +0000 UTCChapter 35 of Game of Kingdoms.
In this, Cregan is back in Sunspear, and discovers why his father was so happy at the end of the last chapter.
And then we get our first POVs from other characters in the story. This, like others that may occur later on, will only ever be from those who never got POVs in canon.
As always, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary. I don't pay any attention to those in 1st drafts.
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Comments
TFTC I really liked this!!! I was not expecting Asha to be pregnant! Part of me wished she would be allowed to accompany him on sea to conquer the Step Stones. But now it would not be wise to bring a pregnant person. I wish we got to hear how everyone else felt about the pregnancy. Such as his lovers, mother, etc. while this child may not be able to inherit everything he achieves, perhaps they could hold one of the islands. If they are inclined to do so. I would have liked to hear the conversation between prince Tristane Edric and him about risks of squiring for him. Such as the optics of him being a bastard, the dangers they face, him being young, etc. did He collect more ballista and supplies in Sunspear?
Austin lloyd
2024-03-10 17:50:44 +0000 UTC
