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The Dark Apprentice Chapter 49

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ahh jealousy, I would once again like to compare dating in friend groups, especially those including a budding dark lord, to Russian roulette with 5 rounds in the cylinder. Though honestly, I am beginning to wonder if the danger is more the possessiveness that Tracey is showing. The way you framed it makes it seem like Fleur and Krum are going together which interesting, and I am curious as to how that will affect the second task. Though it is also possible that it is merely a misdirection and they are were making a statement and their dates are still coming later. The most crucial part to me, however, was Harry's casual acceptance of the murder of the Lord and Lady Bones, not even a hint of distaste or unease. Showcasing Harry's continued descent into darkness. I like the subtle but undeniable showing of his descent, it is not Dumbledore or a Weasley screaming at him about going dark, but instead you are showing it without telling.

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