The Dark Apprentice Chapter 47
Added 2025-08-19 05:00:00 +0000 UTCComments
Really great fanfiction 👍🏻. But where is chapter 46?
Tobias Bach
2025-10-02 03:48:52 +0000 UTCI think it would be more impressive if you wrote how the spells weren’t just simple, but instead harder for regular witches to both create at such scale and maintain. I am glad to see Harry with other girls. It’s normal. Stories that have the MC on the narrow path with one single girl are often bland.
sonicmalibu
2025-08-19 11:20:18 +0000 UTCI can only tell you I'm not deviating
Beau Brown
2025-06-29 01:14:18 +0000 UTCI am wondering if you’re planning on deviating from the original Haphne path or if you’re just trying to make Daphne jealous/realize what she wants. My only concern would be if he is with Tracey first and you don’t kill her off with (probably?) warrington is a continuing conflict between the girls when he ends up with Daphne. On the flip side I’m waiting for the other show to drop with Dumbles. Excited to get fully caught up and see where the story continues to go from here.
Thrivean
2025-06-29 01:08:11 +0000 UTCNice, while I'm not a fan of Harry dating other girls before getting with Daphne I'm enjoying it
Dave Hal
2025-06-16 23:26:01 +0000 UTCCertainly a win worthy of the king snake and student of Slytherin’s Heir. I can only imagine that the Daily Prophet will have a field day with his use of snakes. Tom also seems to still be Tom, and not Voldemort, which I nice since I am honestly hoping we see an actually rational Tom in this story.
Vrail
2025-06-10 15:04:00 +0000 UTC
