Dreams of Home Chapter 89
Added 2024-09-04 03:57:18 +0000 UTCComments
Our heroes in ‘human’ moments/emotions is what enables the readers (such as myself) to connect with the story. You’ve added a depth to the character that hard to adequately describe without writing an essay; which is one of the reasons I admire your writing.
Kevin Edwards
2024-11-22 17:45:58 +0000 UTCYeah I don't like it either, but I agree, I think this is how most would act.
Beau Brown
2024-11-22 17:00:22 +0000 UTCThe idealist in me wants to think that Harry would be too good to break and torture Ole Moldie Warts, but I think the way you wrote this is how most of us would realistically lash out in Harry’s place given their history.
Kevin Edwards
2024-11-22 16:31:22 +0000 UTCHe thought he had 4 left not 4 more to hide. He didn't know they had destroyed more than 1.
Beau Brown
2024-11-14 16:13:27 +0000 UTCWhat happened to the two horcruxes that Tom created after he found out about the first two being destroyed? He gave the locket to Rookwood then said he had 4 more to hide. The cup and the book. That still leaves two unaccounted for.
HDHusky
2024-11-14 14:04:23 +0000 UTCSuperb stuff! Loved the payback ❤️ Hope there is an epilogue to wrap it up and waiting for the next story
R. Perera
2024-09-07 14:42:31 +0000 UTCHarry over here adding new clauses to the Geneva Convention, gd
Sebastian Apodaca
2024-09-04 23:35:08 +0000 UTCSo is this the final chapter or is there going to be an epilogue?
RomeroK
2024-09-04 14:53:24 +0000 UTCWhat does it matter what James would want or not want Lily?!!! It doesn't matter because he is dead! He was weak and lacked the courage to do all that is necessary and look where that got him? Dead and in the ground. None of you understand Lily, Harry lost everything! Everyone he loved and cared for was taken from him til he had nothing left. Harry should prolong Tom's suffering rather than give him a swift end. See how mighty and powerful this so called "Dark Lord" really is.
TheSerpent
2024-09-04 14:24:23 +0000 UTCWhat is so wrong with torturing Tommy? Making sure his last seconds are beyond what any human could endure of agonizing unbearable pain? To make your enemy beg and plea for their life or for swift end only to prolong it all the more? I see no problem with it, it is the least he deserves for all he took from Harry whether was in past life or current life. Make him beg..make him plea...then maybe end his life or prolong it all the more. Enemies do not deserve mercy, least of all ones who have taken everything from you or the one thing most dear to you. Why show mercy to them when they would not do the same if roles were reversed?
TheSerpent
2024-09-04 13:55:02 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed it! It was a long journey, much longer than I planned, but it's time to wrap it up and start a new journey 😁
Beau Brown
2024-09-04 04:20:55 +0000 UTCGreat Story!!
David Dos Reis
2024-09-04 04:20:10 +0000 UTC
