Dreams of Home Chapter 72
Added 2024-05-07 22:10:49 +0000 UTCComments
I don't think she'll ever be his enemy but it certainly hurt
Eva Cole
2024-06-24 03:33:34 +0000 UTCJust don't give up on me! I've surprised people in most stories and try not to be too predictable.
Beau Brown
2024-05-16 09:31:49 +0000 UTCWe have: - a very powerful Riddle - a much stronger than canon, but still vastly outclassed Harry with allies that don't even the odds - an (now 'new') unknown in Elaina who is being trained in her 'Family Magic' by Grindelwald The 'conclusion' we rushed to is so on the nose its got to be an intentional red herring even if everything is actually going in a completely different direction. But even then, there are not many ways this story can go in regards to OC 1 being trained by Wizard God Nr. 2 that won't annoy me even if she won't be your Deus ex machina in the fight against Wizard God Nr. 3. Also, because there was so much negativity in my comments, don't misunderstand me. The story is good and I enjoy it very much, this is not me hating. And maybe we are being unfair in our lack of faith in your creativity. We'll see, I guess.
Agom
2024-05-16 09:19:52 +0000 UTCI love it when yall pretend to know what is going to happen in the story 😂
Beau Brown
2024-05-15 23:18:40 +0000 UTCBecause Voldemort in this story is so far ahead that Harry has to learn unrealistically fast, and people - even though it's probably generally accepted to be a 'bad' trope - prefer that to Elaina being the Mary Sue (who, ironically, is now going to learn unrealistically fast) to even the odds.
Agom
2024-05-15 20:24:49 +0000 UTCYup that one as well as Written in the Stars by TheBlack'sResurgence. And if memory sevres Rise of the Last Potter by HPfanfictioner66
TheSerpent
2024-05-14 16:40:57 +0000 UTCYes but i saw others too … honestly protego diabolica is such an amazing concept for a spell
Carlos Bonilla
2024-05-14 07:06:52 +0000 UTCThis one was mine! Fleur De Lis 😁
Beau Brown
2024-05-14 04:58:48 +0000 UTCCouple fics have read where he did use Protego Diabolica and was badass. Course one of said fics Harry was trained by Gellert himself willingly too so yeah
TheSerpent
2024-05-08 17:30:19 +0000 UTCWould be lovely to see This Harry try to figure out Protego Diabolica just to spite Gellert. Im pretty sure that currently the only thing that made Charlus loose was that he was expecting Harry to be much more hot headed than he actually was and underestimated the training he did while at school. Also would’ve liked to see Arcturus disarm harry at the end of the fight to remind him that even though probably Voldemort would duel him one on one at the end, he could still be ambushed from behind and end up just like the last time.
Carlos Bonilla
2024-05-08 03:08:34 +0000 UTCComparing Hermione to Elaina? Just no. Elaina doesn't even come close to Hermione. Hermione knew what friendship and loyalty was, whole damn world was against Harry it seems especially on the Horcrux hunt and the Goblet of Fire and Hermione never left his side. even went as far as to alter her parents memories to go on the hunt with Harry. Elaine took one look at her remaining family and chose it over Harry in a heart beat...tells me all need to know about her loyalty right there especially compared to Hermione. Hermione was the better one and Harry could do better than Elaina especially right now. He's needs someone by his side, that ain't Elaina.
TheSerpent
2024-05-08 01:32:27 +0000 UTCWell I mean let's be honest here, Harry shoulda been training, getting stronger and more powerful from the get go...not fooling around with a girl of all things when there is a war to win and Tom needs to be destroyed. It's not like being with Elaina was exactly the best for him because he lost people he might not have had he been keeping more of a focus on things like he should have. He shoulda seen that Elaine was gonna choose her family based on how desperate she was for that closure and to meet any still alive..I'd say ened things with her then and there she clearly chose her side.
TheSerpent
2024-05-08 00:01:40 +0000 UTCTry losing everything like Harry did Charlus...everyone and everything you ever loved or cared about then try to sit there and judge Harry for making mistakes he made by trying to go it alone.
TheSerpent
2024-05-07 23:58:31 +0000 UTCAnd he did what exactly? Beat up on the chumps in the Order? Barely beat the top tier Death Eaters in all the flashbacks 😅
Beau Brown
2024-05-07 22:46:08 +0000 UTCIt just feels like Harry is not as powerful as someone who did the things he did before time traveling
Gummyking2
2024-05-07 22:44:54 +0000 UTCI've painted Charlus to be one of the most powerful wizards in the world and people keep saying this 😅 I really don't understand.
Beau Brown
2024-05-07 22:34:12 +0000 UTCGlad harry is finally able to beat Charlus, felt like he should of been able to do it quicker and hopefully harry uses grindelwald prior spell on the manor to kill all in malfoy manor
mikie Jones
2024-05-07 22:26:59 +0000 UTC
