Dreams of Home Chapter 55
Added 2024-01-09 23:04:24 +0000 UTCComments
Honestly I'm glad bellatrix is dead and I hope they make voldemort suffer
Eva Cole
2024-06-23 23:53:58 +0000 UTCYou're not there yet. He's not getting weaker. It's a different problem, but it's not gonna get answered for a while still.
Beau Brown
2024-03-15 08:31:15 +0000 UTCThis is not entirely true though is it? Harry killed Lastrange much earlier in the story and from what info was given he was powerful at Hogwarts and then got training from voldy and Harry outclassed him (if we disregard Harry losing himself, which still happens pretty much every time there is a real combat scenario) And Harry's got months of more training at this point with and without the Potters. It's also about feel, it just feels like Harry's gotten a lot weaker, now that may not be true but that is the feel, and it's kinda wired. Now it feels like i sound awfully negative, but i've really enjoyed this story overall sofar and looking forward to see where this goes!
Rasmus Ytterholm
2024-03-15 08:24:43 +0000 UTCThere wasn't much of a time gap, it just felt that way in the writing. As it should. When you are in catastrophe seconds can feel like hours. Also offering the knowledge also meant his own death. It was the same sacrifice he attempted at the beginning.
Beau Brown
2024-02-15 21:41:04 +0000 UTCThere is such a lag in Harry sending the patronus and help arriving. Even Albus with Fawkes cannot make it in time. And the biggest advantage Harry has is knowledge about the future - why would he give that up?? Charlus, Albus etc know about Horcruxes now, why is he bartering with Tom!
Govs
2024-02-15 14:44:09 +0000 UTCAll the Death Eaters Harry faced to this point were practically Canon fodder. He faced real talent out there, and still won, but it didn't come easy
Beau Brown
2024-01-23 08:26:22 +0000 UTCVoldemort was prepared to spare his friends. The information Harry held was more valuable then their lives and they all knew it. In the end it was a Divine move.
Beau Brown
2024-01-23 08:02:00 +0000 UTCHarry pissed me off in this chapter. You would think by now he would know that surrendering doesn’t work in his favor.
Akilah Hodge
2024-01-23 07:36:31 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed this chapter! I think Rosier was a great addition. He is an excellent choice to show that Harry isn't just OP
Keeperofthevoid
2024-01-12 08:01:21 +0000 UTCHonestly, I couldn't understand Harry's difficulty with Rosier and Bellatrix, it seems to go against everything that has been written so far.
Marcelo Marcal
2024-01-10 20:45:13 +0000 UTCTo be honest too I've always seen Tom as a coward too. Has his minions do lot of his dirty work for him while he just sits back and barks orders and plays the game. I wouldn't play his game though...I'd just incinerate the whole board with Protego Diabolica!
TheSerpent
2024-01-10 02:24:01 +0000 UTCGreat chapter though! Yet again Harry seriously out classed though, something's gotta give there sooner or later especially if he ever hopes to end Tom once and for all.
TheSerpent
2024-01-10 02:11:54 +0000 UTCLoved all the action. Glad Bella is dead finally. And now you almost or did kill off Harry. And you let Moldy see everything. well, I guess I should wait and see where you're trying to go with this.
HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR
2024-01-10 00:09:49 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Loved the action.
kyle ogden
2024-01-09 23:36:25 +0000 UTCLoved the chapter, but I feel like harry and Elaina should be able to fuck up bellatrix and rosier
Gummyking2
2024-01-09 23:34:21 +0000 UTCIntense chapter hope Harry and the others will be okay
Luna Wolf
2024-01-09 23:23:42 +0000 UTC