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Comic Rewards 11-05-2024 (Part 2 of 2)

I want to thank the steering committee for allowing me to take a break from Mistress Theressa and work on this small narrative story about Penelope. It shouldn't be tooooo long but she's cute and I want to cover her predicament as a character. This is just the first page.

Here are the back issues available for download so far. Please enjoy!

https://www.patreon.com/posts/37933824

https://www.patreon.com/posts/37934326

https://www.patreon.com/posts/back-issue-2017-37934369

https://www.patreon.com/posts/37934420

https://www.patreon.com/posts/2020-comic-59546758

https://www.patreon.com/posts/68693963

Thank you all! You're the best.

Comic Rewards 11-05-2024 (Part 2 of 2)

Comments

Okay. I wasn't sure. Thanks for clarifying.

Glenn Sellers

Dude this is a whole comic. It's going into next year.

Jay Naylor

Uh, is this page 2 of 2 or page 1 of 2? The dialog implies there's more to come.

Glenn Sellers

The truth is that I was looking forward to seeing Piper in action, although one question, is she lesbian or bi?

Antonio Fernández Rosa

Been looking forward to this. Penelope is one my favourite characters along with lynne. What can I say, I like naturally hairy girls.

Jacob Moss

So this is where Piper showed up! She and Penelope are both looking great here! A major strength of your artwork is definitely how expressive you make characters. This page is an excellent example! You absolutely nailed Piper's looks especially. Great job making the middle scene feel intense, Piper's look really sells it! Plus the motion lines and panel breaking work well for adding intensity too. The bottom center panel is incredible too! Spectacular work with Piper's face there, superb expression and details like the sweat are a nice touch. It'd be great to see more like that from you! Another thing you did well here was the text, great use of different font sizes and bolding for emphasis. It works well for the "AH!"s and "Right there!" particularly. Penelope's Secret is off to a great start! Excited to see where it goes from here!

Basque

Get the feeling the next page is gonna be about Genny and her having trysts from time to time and it's got her thinkin' she might actually be bi, maybe

thezenfrog

I am excited for this comic in December.

Robert

Ultimate bed and breakfast

Robert

Hot girls

YurY

yeah you can tell she's getting kind of tired with eating box and the intrusive thoughts about penises are starting to plant in.

DeltaWolf

Hah I was right about Piper!

DeltaWolf

MOUSE COMIC! MOUSE COMIC! FUCK YEAH!!! <3<3<3

Silvador

YESSSSSSS, WOOHOO!

Legends

Penelope damn

Luis

Don't often see a mouse eating a cat

glitch

I love it already. The facial expression of her and the knowledge of what's to come. Great work really. :)

GepettoVonStock

This is gonna be fun

pokediginut

Hooray the first page, with a fun beginning

Doomslayer69

Top Notch work as always Jay, thank you for this! Penelope is super cute and I love seeing her in this work of yours! Appreciate the great art, smut or not, your talent and happy to be here!

Reptiles of Lustria

It’s always nice to take a break

Frank


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