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Eve St. Albert
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Amber Ascendant - part two of two

“How many men did you flash?”

Amber hesit

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I think Eve's intent with Amber is the 'fun' bits, without the angst.

Allen R

Great story set in the future of her relationship with Dave. So much for her husband not being a total CUCK at this point in time as she’s about to fuck Phil. Let’s face it she went there with the intention of fucking him, no role player Dave just her wanting strange cock. I mean really if her husband is good with this he needs his head examined. There’s a lot of back story that needs to be told and big questions about her marriage “to what’s his name”.

FU

The Epilogue was intriguing - - there's more going on than just David. I'm still curious about the nipple piercing. Amber is so into David's scenarios while they're going on, but when they're done, they're done. I'm curious what convinced her to do something more permanent.

Allen R

Thank you showing us some more of Amber (in the Epilogue). Maybe, when you have time in between Kayley and Sam, you could fill-in a few of the gaps in Amber's backstory - and open-up her future trajectory (which seems to be moving in a slightly different direction from that as her role as a playmate in David's scenarios).

A Philosophical Doctor

Wow. I was drizzling like Sam.

Craig

Yes, this is actually months along from Amber and David's first encounter. Sort of the beginning and the end. In the first encounter, David wanted her nipples pierced and she scoffed 'no way.' Here, she's pierced and fully healed. So it's five to six months later. I might go back and write some of the intermediate adventures. I don't feel too bound to being too linear here. As I've said, it's very different from Kayley and Sam, much lighter in spirit, and less plot oriented.

Eve St. Albert

I think I need to go back and read the other chapters again - I feel like I missed a lot along the way. For some reason I feel like I hit some kind of worm hole - or better yet a time warp where I jumped ahead. I know the nipple piercing was mentioned before in the 1st chapter by David - but, getting Amber's POV how all the men that's handled her breast makes her feel - the differences of their touch. Don't get me wrong, its a great story - but did I miss all the sexual encounters she seems to reminisce about? Or will there be some other mentioning mixed with later scenes?

Larry Hunt


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