SLIPPING INTO DEPRAVITY - Ch. 25 - Romance, Cuming and Going
Added 2025-08-07 17:05:21 +0000 UTCROMANTIC INTERLUDE, PART ONE OF FOUR
KAYL
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I love this chapter! But as much as you disclaim responsibility for "Kalyley's" literary talent, I know from what I've read that it has to be coming from you, and it is so hot. And it's going to take me at least a month to read all the stories here that are not on Lit.
DOylyCarte
2026-02-06 19:56:19 +0000 UTCBut if I write non-erotic stuff, where do I put the sex? You didn't think of that, did you. Hmm Thank you so much.
Eve St. Albert
2025-09-29 21:20:50 +0000 UTCYou have a knack of writing bar scenes. Loved this. Not the intensity of the early bar chapters, but still good. Full of good erotic writing and yes, just good writing really. You could write non-erotic stuff if you wanted to. Perhaps you have, who knows. It’s a shame we have to go back to the cuckolding and Leroy, drop everything when I yell for you, Brown. Never mind. I am resigning myself to it. I think it’s because they are so young and in love.
Royston smith
2025-09-29 20:15:44 +0000 UTCI love this chapter pulls us back into the lighter, fun, adventuresome, sexy life of Sam and Kayley. Much like a symphony orchestra playing a concerto with its various and contrasting movements, this only adds to the intensity of the dark, erotic chapters when you return to them, and it gives us the comic relief or lighter side of the character’s personalities that is needed in any drama. This is an artistic, gifted structuring of your story, and it only adds to the pleasure for the reader. This is also more realistic. There will be times and moments when Kayley is grounded with her husband again, only to be pulled away bit by bit as time goes on. It’s not a straight descent into hell for her, it’s a pulling back and forth, as she descends further and further into depravity over time with Leroy. This chapter is a natural reprieve from that; a grounding she needs. I know I loved seeing Kayley reconnect with Sam, just days before the next cuck session. And I’m pleased to see that Kayley is “genuinely worried about Sam” and the pending cuck time with Leroy. I do so love the tension and battling desires inside of her. It’s what makes this story stand out. I love the way you bring this complexity of thought to your characters. They are not just cardboard cut-out characters. They are not two dimensional, completely predictable characters. You make them so much more interesting and likeable – especially Kayley as she struggles with between her love for Sam (and the playful sexual adventures they have together), and her dark desires that Leroy brings out of her (Leroy makes her want what he wants; a very dangerous power he holds over her). This story starts out with playful fun, and some very good humor. I love it! Where else can we read about a main character being dressed up like she’s going on a “tour of homeless shelters,” looking like a “Ukrainian grandmother?” Where else would we read a comment like Kayley’s of Sam that “if he put on even a hint of flannel, the marriage was over?” This is funny, playful writing, and the “rent-a-kid” back and forth was a hoot, although this line probably takes the cake: “I’m too upset about not giving teenage soccer players boners because of my awful dowdyness to think straight!” God, this is good writing. When they strolled through the park, simply enjoying the people and their surroundings, you revealed more about Sam, and Kayley’s appreciation for him that is tender, and perfect: “…this was one of Sam’s gifts, when he was around, he made the world seem deeper, more beautiful, more nuanced.” This centers your story on the couple that we have come to love, and that we fear for. Great writing. But then Sam gets playful, and sexy, feeling Kayley up in public (the baggy clothes he chose for her perfect to keep it discreet), and we feel the sexual tension rise, as they play a sexy game out in the open, and yet unseen: “He was feeling me up in a public park and no one had a clue.” There is a real zinger as they start this sexy game, when you said: “You are so fucking evil,” I said, looking out across the park. Off to the left, some twelve-year-olds were with their father learning to fly a kite. I nodded in that direction. “And I fucking love it!” That is so fucking dirty, out in the open, people all around, and young kids – whose hormones are running wild and would really love to watch them play this game – are oblivious to this sexy fun. Kayley loves this, and though she calls Sam “evil,” it’s a different, playful, innocent type of evil that she enjoys with Sam. I love the way you draw out that contrast, of what she shares with Sam, and what she has with Leroy. As you said, Kayley love the “intimacy” she feels with Sam, who “made me feel safe as well as naughty” (Leroy never makes her feel safe). She felt “giddy with arousal” (again, not something she ever feels with Leroy, as well as “radiant and sensuous” (Leroy never made her feel these things). There they are in the park, completely visible, but invisible, while Sam feels up Kayley., and its super-hot, sexy fun to read about. It’s dangerous, but in a safe sort of way. But things got even more interesting when Sam felt her up in front of the musician at the kiosk, who watched him play with her body, while they talked, and Kayley “took every opportunity to touch his [vendor’s] hands.” They upped the ante, and Kayley is soaking wet. Kayley’s naughty nature comes through with the sexy line she gives Sam (anticipating meeting the musician again): “If something naughty and sordid doesn’t happen, I will be extremely disappointed.” I love the dirty, naughtiness of it, but the playfulness they share together. Things really get fun inside the crowded bar where everyone is focused on the soccer game being televised. “Come sit on my lap, little girl.” Kayley’s’ response is perfect: “You’re not a pervert trying to trick me are you?” And Sam’s is too: “I am definitely a pervert.” I love the way you heat things up with this dialog. As Sam feels her up, plays with her clit, and she grinds away on his hard cock, our arousal climes, because we imagine ourselves in this very public place, and it’s dirty, and exciting. Then Kayley thinks something so revealing, and so endearing: “There was something joyful about the way his hands moved under my sweatshirt and peasant skirt, as if he was discovering my body for the first time.” There it is, again the study in contrasts, as Sam and Kayley do something quite filthy (public groping and grinding), it’s “joyful” and new, and fresh, as if Sam was discovering her body for the first time., This playful erotic adventure is bold, but it’s contrasted with the dark, filth of Leroy. Nothing about Leroy is joyful. It may stir an uncontrollable animal lust that thrills Kayley, but it does not give her the joy that Sam’s playful sex romps do. I love this study in contrasts. But the biggest thrill is when they get spotted, and then Kayley performs for the stranger, holding his gaze. Fuck, that’s hot, being groped and grinding while holding a stranger’s gaze from across the room is a fantasy for many readers. When Sam pushes Kayley, our cocks really twitch: “Why don’t you invite him over?” He knows how this will excite his wife. He knows her well: “You are so fucking evil,” I whispered to him, watching the stranger approach. “I love it. How far do we take this?” “He’s on his way. As far as you want.” Fuck. Sam wants to give his wife the dirty excitement that she craves. He loves her that much. And of course, it also gives him a deep, dirty, sexual thrill. She shocks him right back with this line: “I might go further than you expect. A lot further. After all this teasing, I’m feeling adventurous. I need a cock in me, it doesn’t have to be yours.” God, now we all need to fuck. You have us so fucking worked up, that precum is pouring from our cocks. Sam wants this for her – for them together, something shared for a sexual thrill. But he doesn’t really know how far Kayley will really take this. It’s so arousing reading as Bruno plays wit her. And Kayley likes his initial timidity, because “…that made him safe. I felt like I had control.” Again, the contrast with Leroy, where she has no control. Here she enjoyed the control she had over Bruno. “It was exciting to be felt up by a stranger, He touched me differently from Sam.” I love it when you bring us back to Sam, when her thoughts contrast him with Sam. She may be wild. She may be on a descent into utter darkness and wicked depravity, but she still is grounded, from time to time, by thoughts of her connection to Sam. This makes her all the more likeable. But the dark lust for more comes flowing through Kayley, as – hands behind her back and hidden from Sam -- she unrolls the condom, and pulls it off of Bruno. Flesh on flesh, grinding his cock against her clit, she has a small orgasm. But it makes her “ravenous for more.” I love that description of different types of orgasms, and this one leaving her hungry and demanding for more – prococting her appetite. When she starts fucking him bareback in a crowded bar, we are ready to cum, it’s such a hot scene, and such a dirty thing to do. “…willingly my body opened and stretched to receive its invader.” I love that line! She is thrilled to have her body “invaded” by a stranger’s cock, right in front of her husband, and in an open bar with a crowd of people. And then he cums in her: “It felt exhilarating, thrilling. A complete stranger was coming inside me, I was taking his semen, his body for my own, taking his orgasm and owning it.” Fuck, that’s good Eve. The dirty thrill of being filled with a complete stranger’s cum, and her feeling of control -- her owning his body, taking what she wants from it, owning it. Again, a complete contrast from what she gets with Leroy, but it excites her. She thanks her husband for setting this up, for making it possible, for giving her such an exciting time: “I’m speechless. That was high wire. That was working without a net. That was... HOT!!!!” She loves him for giving this to her, and we too love that they can share this dirty, erotic moment. I also love the back and forth – and the ambiguity – when Sam tells her: “You went a lot further than I expected,” and Kayley thinks to herself: “I smirked. You have no idea.” Does he know that Bruno came in her bareback? She doesn’t think so. She’s afraid to tell him. She took Sam’s fantasy, and pushed it a step further than Sam may have wanted her to go – further than Sam could imagine. Even in the midst of this wanted reconnection between Sam and Kayley, we see Kayley diverge from her husband, going further than he plans, taking more of the dirty sex than he knows, because she needs it. She loves Sam, but Leroy has given her a craving for something darker, and dirtier, and right here in front of her husband, she shows us the reader, that she needs more than Sam is giving her – even though she loves Sam, and the sexually thrilling situation he created for her. I doubt Kaley is fully aware of these competing needs at that moment. The need drove her to take a risk right in front of her husband (pulling off the condom and taking Bruno’s cum deep inside of her), but her mind drifts back to what made the day so perfect, and it was Sam. “That’s me. Fearless.” She says”, but then thinks to herself: “As long as I have you there, I thought, to back me up. If you’re there, I know I can do anything” That’s the beauty of the relationship between Sam and Kayley. Sam is her rock, her safety net, and when he sets up experiences for her, she feels safe, because Sam is there to ground her, to protect her. Leroy is dangerous, and she loves the erotic thrill that danger gives her – she loves the undertow of depravity pulling her deeper into darkness with Leroy, craving more and more. Kayley wants both, and slides back and forth between both worlds for now. How long can she continue to do that? Fabulous writing Eve!!! I love the characters more and more, and the way you bring them to life. Complex, full of competing desires, cravings and needs, and often vulnerable. That’s what makes this story so good. Keep up the great work!
TJ Rogue
2025-09-23 18:51:58 +0000 UTCExactly.
Eve St. Albert
2025-08-08 22:40:56 +0000 UTCI think what this chapter does is raise the stakes for the next cuckolding. We see the love and playfulness of the couple here, the kinky smiley joy, which just makes the darkness of the cuck game all the blacker, all the riskier.
Craig
2025-08-08 22:22:52 +0000 UTCI know what you mean, even with the 'gloryhole' chapter,I felt the narrative was departing from its natural trajectory. I loved the way Leroy would sometimes subtley taunt Kayley infront of Sam about her indiscretions at the gloryhole. I loved that she kept it a secret from Sam.Then suddenly, WHAM,she's going on her own for a fourth time.I liked things when Kayley's angst, confusion, temptation and guilt were within her 'loving' relationship with Sam. The way Leroy was inveigling his way into their bond was compelling.The restaurant scene when Leroy tells Sam to wait in a toilet cubicle was dynamite .I'd be lying if I said I didn't miss all that .But hey,I totally get it.Eve writes for her wider audience, they seem to be happy with things.I'm just a turd, belly-aching in the corner.😂😂
Amer Gill
2025-08-08 14:00:59 +0000 UTCEve, I feel like I am your biggest fan (but I’m sure everyone else feels the same way) but for the first time I felt a little disappointed in a chapter. I mean it was nice to kinda go back to the beginning before Leroy really took control. And the funny thing is just earlier today I went back and read the first two chapters again and they were actually better. I guess for me the excitement has been building up with each chapter for so long that for me this chapter seemed to let some of the air leak out and the pressure drop. Plus I know I have said this before but I look forward to each new chapter in hopes of finding Kayley fall further into the rabbit hole. I’m sorry to say that I really don’t want to see her and Sam having a fun day in the park. So sorry for my comments I just wanted to be honest about how i felt about this chapter., You are still the best author out there and this story is still my favorite story currently running. And I hope you keep writing it for a long time to come.
Ron
2025-08-08 05:33:11 +0000 UTCIt's going to be hot! But we have so much filth to get through first.
Eve St. Albert
2025-08-08 00:57:38 +0000 UTCI can’t wait for The gang bang
Chris N
2025-08-08 00:36:28 +0000 UTCAble to visualize the surroundings and feelings very nicely, well done. Could have added more description of the semen feel, activity while she got up, walked, etc
WILLMAC
2025-08-08 00:13:26 +0000 UTCSorry, I meant to say that it seemed incongruously innocent.
Allen R
2025-08-07 22:29:25 +0000 UTCThis is like the pre-Leroy Kaylie and Sam. It's nice to see they can still connect this way, but it also seems incongruous given what's already happened - - and what's going to happen.
Allen R
2025-08-07 21:43:45 +0000 UTCOne of the things I absolutely love about writing Kayley is how quick witted and funny she is. She's so verbal, and so excessive. I absolutely loved the early part where she's kvetching about being made to look frumpy and starts going on about renting children so she can humiliate them with how frumpy their mom looks compared to all the hot soccer mom milfs. That's when she's most alive to me. I'm not that smart or funny, I'm not quick witted like her. I do all right. But Kayley is a live wire, and she's such fun to write in those scenes. It's almost like she's right there, dictating to me.
Eve St. Albert
2025-08-07 20:24:51 +0000 UTCEve...you did it again. “I am seriously unenthusiastic,” I whispered. “My mulberry withers from lack of moisture.” This is one of many lines that shows the witty side you have for Kayley. This is what makes me laugh and want more....your wit runs neck and neck with the sexy side of your mind. Not every writer can do that. It's like finding two surprises inside a cracker-jack box!
Larry Hunt
2025-08-07 20:07:32 +0000 UTCI agree Frank - if she rides a pony...she wants to ride it bareback! Pulled that saddle right off...
Larry Hunt
2025-08-07 20:01:14 +0000 UTCI was very happy to be able to read the new chapter today! And it's incredibly sexy what Kayley makes of what Sam offers her - my head cinema is running at full speed and I can't wait to see how it goes on. Besides, it's nice to see that Sam is not only a weak victim, but can also continue to support her!
Frank Stiegeler
2025-08-07 18:24:16 +0000 UTC
