SLIPPING INTO DEPRAVITY - Ch. 21, The Guys and Blaze Midnight
Added 2025-06-13 06:56:09 +0000 UTCSAM HANGS OUT WITH LEROY, PART TWO OF TWO
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What a setup, Leroy even lets it slip but Sam doesn’t catch it. Sam and Kayley are young and naïve, trusting fodder to be used up by predators like Leroy. I think Leroy owns the strip club and again talks Sam into the sin of omission, an act more deadly to a relationship than what was done.
FU
2025-10-16 22:01:29 +0000 UTCHmm! I haven’t commented for a while, so thought I would hand in my 2 pennies worth. Let’s get one thing out the way first: you are probably the best pure “writer” of this type of genre I have read, and I have read a lot. The way you write dialogue and convey the internal motivations of the protagonists is second to none. However, i have to say I enjoyed the earlier chapters more than these cuckold chapters. Sorry dark lady! The chapters in the bar were much more varied in personnel and less introspective in terms of the internal monologues of the characters. I find the latest chapters drag a little even though they are so well written. 20, for example was mostly Leroy working on Sam and we got to see his psychological moves against Sam while pretending to be buddies in detail, culminating in the wanking off of Sam by Leroy. Tbh there was nothing that turned me on in this scene. I get why he grabbed his cock, to assert control and introduce the bisexual angle that he tells Blaze to use in 21, but this sort of thing turns me off tbh. And I can categorically state that when I was young it wasn’t the done thing to wank each other off in the playground, you would have risked defenestration from a high building. To me there has to be a convincing sex scene in each chapter and 20,21 don’t have them. I am also beginning to wholly dislike Leroy, which I suppose I am supposed to do. You keep saying he is pure evil. Okay, let’s run with that. That means has no redeeming features. Nothing to hang your hat on. I just get cold calculation from a guy who just seems to want to fuck up the loving couples life. No back story that tells me why he is like that. I don’t like him. But, to me you have to identify with some parts of the villains personality. I smile a lot at Lester’s disdain for the peons, the wicket fence safe existence of the majority. His ferocious singularity and passionate pursuit of Sarah I can identify with. His acting ability is also worth a chortle. With Leroy though I am struggling to find anything that tells me where he is coming from, what makes him tick, other than wanting power over them. I also didn’t like Blaze much. I have met women like this and they are not fun. Well drawn though. You got her spot on. Perhaps my problem with these chapters is: to much like real life!
Royston smith
2025-09-28 08:40:07 +0000 UTCI love Blaze too, and I'll make sure she comes back, eventually. And thank you for picking up on the parallels. Leroy is trying to drag Sam, not only into his world, but his way of thinking, and using a way of thinking about Blaze to subliminally drive a wedge into his relationship. Not only persuading him to lie about the encounter, but subtly trying to get him to see Blaze... and very indirectly Kayley, as a hole and not a person worthy of respect. Despite every claim of friendship, there's never a moment where Leroy isn't on the attack.
Eve St. Albert
2025-09-18 18:35:41 +0000 UTCIt’s an interesting chapter, revealing in so many ways. Sam watches the video and it pains him that Kayley enjoyed being fucked by Leroy so much more than being fucked by him. It makes him feel like he is sexually inferior, and he has to wonder if he is losing her. And then there’s Blaze. I love this character. Clearly Leroy has spoken to her ahead of time, and paid her to demean Sam, but she truly likes Sam (even whispers that into his ear, and kisses him full on the mouth), so her bitch persona cracks and breaks at times, giving Sam a glimpse of the real Blaze – someone whom he likes, and feels bad for (especially for coming inside her bareback). It’s a great arc in the story. What really struck me was how demeaning Leroy was after the strip club as he talked about Blaze, and “skanks” like her, because what he said reminds us of Kayley’s behavior, and her hidden life, in the glory hole booths. As Leroy said of Blaze: “She’s a skank,” ... “She’s Kleenex. Blow in her and walk away. That’s what she’s paid for.” This gets Sam thinking he might be right: “She’d seemed reckless, almost dangerous … it was likely that the real person underneath, the person who could strip and fuck and act like that, was probably fucked up and damaged, and dangerous … so shallow as to be a cipher. Just a hole.” The irony is that Sam is now describing the behavior of Blaze – who is just a “hole,” but gets paid for it – as being fucked up, when his own wife is doing this and more, but just for the fun of it (not getting paid) in the glory hole booth – something that Leroy has convinced her to do. The hidden reality is that Kayley is more fucked up, and out of control, than Blaze, but Sam has no idea just how fucked up his wife is. His thoughts about Blaze could apply to Kayley, and with more force. Though if Sam really thought about it, even not knowing everything about Kayley’s private, hidden depravities at the glory hole, he should draw his own parallel after being reminded by Sam what Kayley has done in front of Sam: “Of course,” he said, “she spreads her legs and fucks around with other men. It shouldn’t be a big deal for her if you do it with a stripper.” I love the parallels between Blaze and Kayley, and the irony of the entire conversation about Blaze.
TJ Rogue
2025-09-18 17:51:27 +0000 UTCYou will see more of Blaze.
Eve St. Albert
2025-07-09 17:43:27 +0000 UTCI for one love Blaze - she's my kinda of girl. Loved how she feed his cum back to him - and all along belittling him with his little piggy. Haters will be haters - take the bad with all the good and move on. You are a great story teller - some folks just will never get that - don't waste time with their comments - it's their jealousy.
Larry Hunt
2025-07-09 17:41:57 +0000 UTCYes, which is why I question what sort of character Sam has, he get’s led around by the nose by Leroy much too easily. Seems like he’s been living in a bubble.
Vinny
2025-06-15 21:09:40 +0000 UTCif Sam so easily fucks this stripper, i’m not really sure that the Sam/Kayle coupling is quite as good as we have been lead to believe to this point. i feel like this is very out of character for Sam to even have gone along to the strip club.
noah
2025-06-14 18:41:33 +0000 UTCi agree, to some extent. at some point the manipulation just gets to be so prevalent that i can’t see Sam continuing to fall for it. some of it seems pretty obvious. i think that the manipulation is necessary for this story, but it could be a bit more subtle and have the same effect for Sam and the readers.
noah
2025-06-14 18:38:53 +0000 UTCSo I forget - is Sam like a 14 year old boy in hs. Starting to not like this story at all. Too much Leroy and really he’s such a douchebag character I don’t know how anyone could take him seriously - other than a 14yo high schooler who has never been away from home. Giving handjobs to other boys in high school IS NOT a thing. Seriously could not read through all the way. Leroy is just too toxic/creepy and the other characters are pretty much irrelevant and vessels for his douche-ness.
Vinny
2025-06-13 17:03:21 +0000 UTCThat's the next two chapters coming up. Two weeks from now, and a month from now. In the meantime, I'll have something for the in between.
Eve St. Albert
2025-06-13 13:42:36 +0000 UTCIt was a good chapter I’m just ready to See Kaylee again . I’m waiting for the chapter when she goes to his house
Chris N
2025-06-13 12:38:10 +0000 UTCBravo. Yes. Leroy almost exposes himself when he says he met Blaze at the bar, and he has to cover quickly. But yes, that's exactly it. Leroy offered double rates for her to play with them and to sexually humiliate Sam while keeping him turned on. Either get him to come fast, even prematurely ejaculate, or to eventually be so humiliated he loses his erection. And make sure that he knows he's smaller and inadequate compared to Leroy. Be sexually aggressive to Sam, don't let him have any control. Undermine him, and push the latent homosexual angle. It gets a little twisted, because Blaze is basically improvising all the way through, making shit up as she goes along based on Leroy's instructions. And there's a wrinkle in that she instinctively likes Sam a lot more than she likes Leroy, who gives her creep vibes. So she has these random moments of niceness/kindness/affection, such as kissing Sam on the mouth, or whispering in his ear or even taking the condom off. She did get a bit pissed at him when he came in her. On the other hand, she faked her orgasm with Leroy. Leroy uses the whole thing to play out the hero and Sam's best friend, continually defending him from Blaze, having her service Sam, but telling her to stop insulting him. Then afterwards, he uses the "what a crazy skank bitch" to male bond. It's all about undermining and emasculating Sam. A Blaze POV would have been interesting, because she's a fun character, and in this scene she's all over the map. We're going to be seeing Blaze again... with Kayley. And a Leroy POV would have made all this so much clearer. But we've already seen his POV last chapter, so we know what he's doing and how he's doing it. This time, I wanted to show it working. I wanted a Sam POV because I wanted to show him succumbing to manipulation, while at the same time being an active sexual character and decent person. No matter how misogynous Leroy tries to convince him to be, and how Blaze fucks with him, he can't help thinking of her as a person and feeling empathy. And yes, Leroy's got him to decide to lie to Kayley. That's part of his strategy. The more honest they are with each other, the harder they are to manipulate. He needs them keeping secrets from each other, lying to each other and ultimately mistrusting each other.
Eve St. Albert
2025-06-13 12:19:44 +0000 UTCEve, fantastic chapter. It’s amazing to read and watch how Leroy starts to shape Sam into the thinking less of himself. Even though both him and Leroy have about the same size cock he is now totally believing his is small vs Leroy’s much bigger cock. It’s obvious that the whole thing with Blaze was set up to further convince Sam that he is inferior to Leroy. And I also liked how Leroy convinced Sam not to tell her what they had done while together. So now we have Sam keeping secrets from Kayle. Now we have both of them keeping secrets from each other. And I think most important was how he managed to put the thought into Sam’s mind about all the degrading things that she had said to Sam in the video. It’s almost like Sam has now completely forgotten that it was supposed to be role playing and now believing that those words were actually really how she felt. Great chapter. But now I am Really looking forward to more with Kayle and Leroy to watch Kayle’s degradation go even further and further into the depths of total slutdom and become a total whore while leaving Sam behind and unwanted and no longer needed. Just a total cuck. Keep up your amazing efforts.
Ron
2025-06-13 09:56:14 +0000 UTC
