I am going to start the lineart for all of the pages from here, and I will post them as I finish them. And from there I will post the colored and finished pages one by one.
I am going to finish the first 8 pages before I consider working on the last half of the around 20 or so page comic mostly to see how it performs first and if I should continue it.
Let me know if you can tell what is going on at this point. I think it's pretty obvious but there are some things hidden in the unfinished text.
And yes, In my headcanon Retsuko has a horny version of her rage demon.