adblood 28
Added 2025-01-11 20:00:07 +0000 UTCAlmost 20k words! woooo! Thanks for reading.
I might be moving next week or the week after, so there might not be a chapter next week. I'll still be writing but getting an internet connection might not be easily possible.
Comments
The more I read this, the more I think Mark should become a true villain, not a playacting one. The systems of power in the world are beyond screwed up. They are already playing games of their own to benefit themselves potentially to the disadvantage of people everywhere. What matters to the powers that be is that they remain the powers that be. Kill all monsters is right, even if they're human.
Benjamin Meyers
2025-01-20 22:56:16 +0000 UTCDamm i binged everything in a week and i'm left wanting for more 😫.
Nathan moi
2025-01-17 05:52:14 +0000 UTCYou could look into starlink, although it’s quite pricey
Rylee Richter
2025-01-15 23:24:09 +0000 UTCI read between the chapter where Tartu stomped Mark to here, and this was damn satisfying. I wonder if the focus will turn to just how terrifying Union is in the "wrong hands"?
Rayse
2025-01-14 02:24:16 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! I have this ballsy insane idea, it would be hilarious if they plot an heist with Credenza to steal the 40 tons of "can't be used" adamantium
ciopo
2025-01-13 00:24:35 +0000 UTCGod, I wish I could like this chapter more than once. It was just so, utterly, viscerally satisfying to see him reach his breaking point. Obedience/Freedom? Absolutely fantastic, and I loved how vivid the imagery was in your writing.
Robert H.
2025-01-12 08:27:34 +0000 UTCMy God, what a great chapter. Haven't felt this riled up since Debbie's red lightning chapters. Seriously, great work Arcs
Whaler Whaler
2025-01-12 04:11:10 +0000 UTCDamn! Now that's a hero show. ...I feel like Tartu is gonna get a lot of undeserved hate here. But also, his entire team just got completely curbstomped. Additionally, "Miss Masher?" Alas, poor Sally. I do like the Power Girl costume though.
Ben Nikel
2025-01-12 04:10:58 +0000 UTCCall him ShavalliVein the way he'd be ingesting it
FeelingsandFoibles
2025-01-12 04:02:28 +0000 UTCOmfg i fucking loved that!!! Mark was so bad ass!!! Yesss! Can't wait to see the responses to that moment of his!
FeelingsandFoibles
2025-01-12 04:01:39 +0000 UTCI think if you started a go fund me to pay a professional drivers service to drive you to internet and back you’d get it in a day.
Allan Miller
2025-01-12 03:15:52 +0000 UTCThat was freaking amazing. Seriously well written last chapter.
Allan Miller
2025-01-12 03:14:22 +0000 UTCI'm so mad! Darn you for riling me up before bed!
Dog City
2025-01-12 02:42:54 +0000 UTCWoah.
DuB
2025-01-12 02:18:18 +0000 UTCDamn this chapter made me angry. I'm still shaking. They got off too lightly at the end! Way too lightly. Should have cut off everyone of Tartu's team memember's feet off and let them walk on stumps. Should have made Tartu drink that drug-laced coffee, make him taste his own medicine. Fuck I just want tartu drugged with that accursed drug for a month straight, straight into his veins.
Uroš
2025-01-12 01:47:00 +0000 UTCAlso hoping for some proper problems in t-boys future ^^
s476
2025-01-11 23:05:35 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, hope we get the next one next week :D
s476
2025-01-11 23:04:48 +0000 UTCIndeed.. what is happening at the collective! Not sure why Freyala not intervened, unless there's some meta plot going on preventing them / the whole thing was a setup for Mark to show why people really should mess with him
Tom
2025-01-11 21:56:46 +0000 UTCI hadn't even considered the use of union in such a way. No wonder it's been hinted as being mind control adjacent. Oof. Loved it!
Brandon Maguire
2025-01-11 21:37:03 +0000 UTCPlease, i need more chapters. I could die this week and miss then
Bruno Correia
2025-01-11 20:56:18 +0000 UTCI hope a chapter next week because this one was so fucking cool. But totally understand if life gets in the way. What a freaking banger!! Domination // free will? Fuck! Union is really cool
Cameron C
2025-01-11 20:50:32 +0000 UTCit's actually the house i was going to move too anyway, which is now in a recovering disaster zone. they have power, but they might not have water, and i need to get internet in a different way
Arcs
2025-01-11 20:18:18 +0000 UTCAlso best wishes
s476
2025-01-11 20:08:15 +0000 UTCWhere u moving that an internet connection might be a problem even via hotspot?
s476
2025-01-11 20:08:08 +0000 UTC
