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Added 2024-01-27 19:17:59 +0000 UTCFrom Fenrir, Veird hung in the sky like a silve
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thanks for the chapter 'monsters beyond a [Time Stop]' beyond -> behind
Corwin Amber
2024-03-11 14:01:21 +0000 UTCI think Kirginatharp will end up as the God of Magic once Nothy is defeated. Nothy will become the God of Magic but probably the one with the shortest tenure. As per Mel, it's the Darkness itself which is moving the Mantle from him in an irrevocable way.
jj
2024-01-28 10:00:08 +0000 UTCNGL this was like a season of Doctor Who in one chapter. I love it.
Nick Youngstrom
2024-01-28 04:42:26 +0000 UTCI guess I'll see how everything goes, but, at the moment, I think I'll be disappointed if Nothanganthor ends up surviving, getting reincarnated, and retaining a large degree of his power. I get that Erick's worldview is that of second chances and that everything can be made better, but what Nothanganthor has done feels a step too far. But I suppose that's why Erick is a better man than I.
Matt H
2024-01-28 01:23:57 +0000 UTCYeah totally. A story of a dude with a dude, sooo great! Erick and Quilatalap forever!!
Heru Kane
2024-01-27 22:03:42 +0000 UTCJane went and resolved one of my major complaints about this last book (Nobody but Erick matters) and gave us some Flatt Family time
N0m_N0m
2024-01-27 22:00:29 +0000 UTCErick has to save Poi, of course. Nothanganathor claimed to have killed him! (and all the other people need to be saved as well) and [redacted redacted redacted] because [redacted redacted redacted] and yeah [redacted redacted redacted].
Arcs
2024-01-27 22:00:03 +0000 UTCLoved the chapter. The magics and time stuff and personal script creation and discussions and all that. Brilliant. That said the "let's not try and change Mel dying" part as very huh? and wtf? to me. Why would he accept it. It literally makes no sense. Also why would what happened in a false timeline be true, that def makes no sense to me. So that part I didn't like. Beyond that, great chapter!
Heru Kane
2024-01-27 21:58:13 +0000 UTCThis chapter confused me. On one hand it seems like progress was made in fighting against Nothanganthor (the Benevolence planetoids, Personal Scripts, etc.). But on the other it seems like the War has already been Lost and Decided with Nothanganthor becoming the God of Magic which is his entire goal. What's the point of continuing to fight if the outcome is already known and can't be changed even through paradoxical time travel?
Matt H
2024-01-27 21:51:07 +0000 UTCWow great chapter!!! Body, Mind, Soul for everyone
Pablo Barbatto
2024-01-27 21:17:34 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. I love the personal script "Store Manager" is hilarious 😆 Also, does Melemizargo not realise Erick had to forgive HIM of quite a lot back in the day?
David Bailey
2024-01-27 21:16:37 +0000 UTCthe climax seems close. i wish there were more stories in this genre with gay/bi male protagonist.
twentytoo
2024-01-27 20:52:24 +0000 UTCDang, what a ride. With everything that was happening I was half expecting the war to somehow end right here in this chapter. But with so many twists and turns I also realize the real end will likely creep up on me seemingly out of nowhere sometime soon here. It's unfortunate that Big M's death is unavoidable even with the level of power Erik has these days. It seems it would take a direct intervention by the Dark itself to save him at this point but it's been made clear that he broke the rules of his Godhood many times and the Dark would never break it's own rules in turn to save someone like that. Especially given what we have seen of the Fractal Fairy and the hair lady and such - Big M's continued existence is surely meaningless to them. Shame, but it makes narrative sense and lends weight to even the most positive outcomes possible with this war. Wild how the last half dozen chapters just keep leaving me even more excited than the last. Sorry for no paragraph breaks, the mobile app sucks and doesn't allow those.
Emily Gurnavage
2024-01-27 20:45:28 +0000 UTCOh I love that Jane is the one that remind Erick that he doesn’t have to play by the conventional rules and that he can break it and change things. It’s great that Rozeta, Jane, and Erick ended up creating the Personal Script. I also love that the Gods are so appreciative of Erick’s efforts. There are so many awesome moments on this chapter. I’m looking forward to all of Veird reacting to this big change. Thanks for the chapter and I can’t wait for what happens next.
Zero
2024-01-27 20:31:47 +0000 UTCI love Jane now <3
Rectum
2024-01-27 20:05:43 +0000 UTC
