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Added 2024-01-13 19:39:12 +0000 UTCErick sat across from Shadow, on pillows, on th
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It suits Erick too, for all that he deals with serious stuff, I feel that lightheartedness is core to benevolence, if he weren't the sorty of person who could consciously see the best in a situation, he wouldn't be who he is
Jake Lewis
2024-01-14 19:23:05 +0000 UTCThis was very silly, I loved it
Jake Lewis
2024-01-14 19:21:19 +0000 UTCThanks
Thando Nkadimeng
2024-01-14 07:31:17 +0000 UTCIs Time Traveler Erick in the guise of someone Past Erick slept with? I guess that'll probably come next chapter.
Rayse
2024-01-14 04:50:08 +0000 UTCSo the meat of this chapter - the Benevolence space stuff and the helping the universe and him learning time magics and all that, that was awesome. Really good magic stuff! I said this elsewhere but I love how you keep to the logic of your universe so that its possible to predict potentials due to things being explained. Like, for example, all that you had Erick do through his Authority over Benevolence I had figured that was possible. Not sure about waking up in the bed of himself, that is questionable to me. I hope its not real him and like a Deep Paradox him and stuff. Also I'm surprised he didn't pull up his Status first thing, he did it when he Ascended, why not upon being Transcended. But yeah, this was a pretty good chapter. Oh, I am super happy how he is like "I'm married twice" cause Quilatalap is one of his partners, yay! (he should ditch the other and keep him, hehe)
Heru Kane
2024-01-14 01:57:24 +0000 UTCHuh well then. Erick is Hax. But it is interesting to see how much bigger the universe/multiverse is. Tho I am curious about how the other Fae found out about his attempts. I thought he hid himself very well. Tho I guess Fae can see Fae. I am definitely surprised by that ending of Erick meeting Erick. Tho young Erick definitely made me laugh. Thanks for the chapter I enjoyed everything about it. Can’t wait for next week’s chapter.
Zero
2024-01-14 00:34:28 +0000 UTCBwahahahahaha oh my god yes, this was worth the entire buildup until now even though I have to wait another week. I laughed so loud and then tried to explain it to my wife but realized quickly that I couldn't explain it properly without telling her far too much of the story to date
Isaac Boyles
2024-01-13 21:52:09 +0000 UTCErick Flatt, the Turninator.
James Skinner
2024-01-13 21:26:09 +0000 UTCYoung Erick, demolishing fragile masculinities... with his dick
João Vene
2024-01-13 21:23:16 +0000 UTCWell that's certainly one way to end a chapter! I know now's probably not the best time to do so, but I hope at some point we get to see Erick cause a few more shenanigans on Earth with revealing mana, magic, etc.
Matt H
2024-01-13 21:18:00 +0000 UTCYoung Erick is a dick lol. Will we be seeing Jane's mother Margaret in the next chapter? Feels like it'd be part of this whole completing the circle by coming back to Earth arc. Thanks for the chapter!
James Skinner
2024-01-13 20:31:16 +0000 UTC
