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Added 2023-12-02 20:00:04 +0000 UTCErick gazed up at the sky over Ascendant Mounta
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My favorite part of this chapter was with Erick talking with Tiza Nindi. It was nice seeing her without the malevolence. That awkward, hopeful, and wistful nervousness that she displayed was so well written. I hope this isn't the last we see of her. Thanks for the chapter!
CM
2023-12-05 13:43:58 +0000 UTCDon't worry I also until this moment pictured it as around Veird not around the Sun 😆 I thought he was around one of those holes that went through all the layers that a claw or leviathan made, is how I pictured him seeing all three at once. 😅
Stephen Brown
2023-12-04 03:45:29 +0000 UTCThanks
s476
2023-12-03 22:59:30 +0000 UTCSoon, the Head Priestess of Sininindi was out of her hermit home on the second floor or the church, rushing down the stairs into the main worship area, and then crashing out of the door. Or -> of
Lu
2023-12-03 20:37:54 +0000 UTCThanks
Thando Nkadimeng
2023-12-03 17:36:51 +0000 UTCI hope Rozeta gets a proper Erick hug at some point, she deserves it!
Jake Lewis
2023-12-02 22:54:53 +0000 UTCErick Flat divine therapy service
Spark
2023-12-02 22:19:26 +0000 UTCDespite even saying that it was a Dyson sphere I completely forgot that Fenrir was around the sun instead of Veird. Thanks for the reminder!
Matt H
2023-12-02 21:59:40 +0000 UTCOh hey there’s a lot going on. So that’s how Fae are born and how they eternally exist. It seems like Shadow and Fairy Moon are integrating with the community even more. It’s kinda cool to see a little more behind the curtain of how the script works. Also side note im hoping to see Quill, Solomon, Destiny, Jane and the other kids Ascend and how their ascension would go. I’m curious as to how the dragon curse would be lifted and how the Forever War is going to be permanently shut down. Thanks for today’s chapter and I can’t wait for what happens next.
Zero
2023-12-02 21:49:35 +0000 UTCfxd!
Arcs
2023-12-02 21:36:17 +0000 UTCthanks for the chapter 'said, “I’ll got all' I'll -> I've
Corwin Amber
2023-12-02 21:32:50 +0000 UTCFenrir is a Dyson Sphere around the sun. Its basically a giant ball. Outward faces outer space and is where he landed. Inward faces the sun at the center, which has some version of Notty. From descriptions its got holes in it now, but we don't know. Veird was a 'normal' planet, now its a Shell World. It contains many layers like an onion, with each layer having a ceiling that has an illusionary sky. What was once just the normal land is but a layer. The ritual done at the end, the place where the Silver Forest is planted, is on the outer surface looking out into space towards the sun.
Heru Kane
2023-12-02 21:27:08 +0000 UTCGood chapter. Lots of fun stuff. The Fractal Mark being used by Erick to Communicate with Benevolence makes a lot of sense for what his use there would be. I addmitedly thought he already could communicate with Benevolence since he has Authority over it, but it makes sense he needs to be fully of it before he gains that level. The growing Darkness at the end, super cool. Aww on Sinninndii, so glad he helped her. The gods saying "hey did you research magic" is hilarious cause its like us speaking via them when we go "come on Erick do more magic research slash casting". The Silver Forest stuff at the end, wow, super cool. As was the related pushing out the Script. Honestly the more space the Script takes over, that is the vaster its Authority covers, the safer Verid is. So thumbs up on that. Yeah, good chapter!
Heru Kane
2023-12-02 21:26:06 +0000 UTCI think I need to go back and reread the chapter(s) about the construction of Fenrir because I'm having a very hard time keeping track of all the different levels and surfaces associated with Veird at this point. Even after rereading the section I still can't figure out exactly where that final ritual took place and how Erick could see what he was seeing simultaneously. I think it was on one of the levels of the Dyson sphere, but I'm not sure how he could see Veird, the surface of Fenrir, and the universe all at the same time. Otherwise another great chapter! It was sad to see what happened to Sininindi, but it looks like Erick is getting her back on her feet. Although, the longer we go without a real counterattack by Nothanganathor makes me think it'll be that much worse when it finally happens.
Matt H
2023-12-02 21:25:25 +0000 UTC
