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Erick stepped out onto a large grassy island. T

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He is kind of in a hurry, so he isn't exploring ANY additional powers. Supposedly, the people of his district are always searching for their next step up, so he should be able to get, like, a Cultivation system, some kind of Psyker-tyoe ability, and potentially upgrade himself with tech and advanced biology. Though the last two seem less likely, instead he will likely get like a technomagical smart phone or whatever.

Tristan R Mitchell

Kinda surprised Eric doesn't show more interest in learning tech/computational powers

Naoggeddon

Thanks for the chapter! I have a suspension that Shadow is Ophiel's mom and this is the start of the union between Shadow and Eric that will lead to his birth.

CM

Doesn't mean he needs to do it. Or that's its the best. Or necessary. Also there are multiple ways to have offspring.

Heru Kane

I'm enjoying this practice of giving us his stat sheet at the end of the chapter when changes happen. Sometimes when authors want to do that more naturally it feels really awkward when the main character "opens up their stats to take a look". Much rather this way where we dispense of the pretense and just paste the stat sheet for the reader.

Patchumz

It was pretty plainly pointed out imo. To spawn a new generation of powerful beings based on two of the most powerful beings in the Verse. Shadow very clearly wants a dynasty of power to fill her universes. Especially power so adept at keeping everything running smooth. She has shown a liking to this idea for a long time, given the Gods of Magic tend to be her offspring.

Patchumz

Rosetta will want that awakening machine like yesterday, that's pretty much free mana, it can even pay itself from increased mana production!

Rognaroc

You said easy peasy! Haha. I commented that last week. It was a joy to read you wrote it.

luckeybrady

But I like seeing what people think of Erick's actions. Also his magics are amazing.

Heru Kane

So the chapters great, though I have to admit I am not much a fan of the political marriage aspect. That's a big "really? Why?" to me.

Heru Kane

Nice to see Erick applying what he learned on Veird!

Joppest

Oh interesting shadow and Erick, well hopefully this becomes a polyamory relationship whether anyone breaking relationships off and breaking hearts. Also while l like the empire building and war aspects, I find the magic creation and civilization building aspects more interesting. Can we also see more of Ericks feelings about all the big changes and potential shakeups to his future plans and relationships. Thanks for the chapter

Zero

Amazing chapter from start to finish. I also love the deceptive timeframe.

Robert H.


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