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Added 2023-07-08 19:01:00 +0000 UTCThe plan was simple and yet Erick couldn’t tell
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I suspect it's impossible for plot reasons, but I think it'd be fun to bring back the people who (probably) opposed the Malevolence throughout history. Off the top of my head the space elf, the Atomic Wizard, and Idyrvamikor (Kirginatharp's brother).
IRLight
2023-07-14 13:51:35 +0000 UTCDo you think it’s possible to get back that space elf with a trip through the dark?
Pheonixarcher
2023-07-13 22:23:52 +0000 UTCAbsolutely loved this chapter. You know, earlier in the story whenever you described the original cosmology, I always felt like it was a more interesting setting for a story. I have to say though, with how things are shaping up and the direction its leading, the current cosmology is just as interesting to me now.
Overclocked
2023-07-10 00:25:25 +0000 UTCHe'll make another Ophiel after his soul heals. Probably take some extra time to get over it as well. He still has the original spell.
Overclocked
2023-07-10 00:01:02 +0000 UTCHa! Memeing an anti-meme.
jj
2023-07-09 11:35:59 +0000 UTClearning about not-useful things is how you throw off the Red Sparks~
Arcs
2023-07-09 02:23:24 +0000 UTCIs learning about the ships really useful? I mean, these are ships that couldn't return to their home planets so maybe they don't work well in Veird. And the way they crystals produce mana, maybe they have a sub-atomic slime in there?
jj
2023-07-09 02:12:03 +0000 UTCFUCK YEAH! Magitech is awesome! Dyson swarm to shield veird with innumerable possibilities thanks to of all things, slimes!
Pheonixarcher
2023-07-09 01:01:20 +0000 UTCI kinda really want Erick to just straight up ask "Rozeta why does the script stop wizards from Crystallizing?"
Echohunter
2023-07-08 23:38:44 +0000 UTCI know Eric is happy about Ophiel being born but how will he continue to scope around the world to solve problems manually all at the same time? Would he be able to create a simulacrum spell?
Pablo Barbatto
2023-07-08 22:29:55 +0000 UTCMaybe he has tried to find out who Yggdrasil's partner is and time has rolled back. Like he suggests it has happen when approaching Phagar and why he is the only version still alive. My concern is the conversation that Destiny had with the dragon from Glistering Depth about plotting against Eric. Where Red Spark influence? Or just a Wizard being a Wizard?
Pablo Barbatto
2023-07-08 22:22:54 +0000 UTCAgreed
Jackjargon
2023-07-08 21:38:31 +0000 UTCHmm it seems like the script inadvertently dampens the wizard process, tho it definitely seems like so much shenanigans are going on due time and memory alteration. The most interesting thing to me is the other Planars and the civilizations they come from. It be awesome to see how those interact post Sundering Search stuff
Zero
2023-07-08 21:34:22 +0000 UTCFirst of all, sort of off topic, I feel like Erick not investigating Yggdrasil's prospective relationship partner to make sure it's not some Red Spark agent is a massive opsec violation during this whole process. Kinda annoys me that he's willing to potentially doom the future for his kid. Anyways. I desperately hope he spends more effort trying to escape the script so he can go full Wizard. Or better, trick Malevolence into reality side-shifting him and then go full Wizard while he's there, then warp back. He's Paradox after all, it shouldn't be much trouble to retain his full Wizard status even though he's coming from another Reality.
Patchumz
2023-07-08 21:22:39 +0000 UTCThe juxtaposition of the Malevolence eating reality against the domestic sweetness of that ending scene is just strange and unnerving. In a way that makes sense, given what is happening, don't get me wrong, but it leaves me feeling a bit twisted inside.
Collateral_ink
2023-07-08 21:00:54 +0000 UTCReading through this, I got lulled into a bit of a false sense of security and then bam, red reality shift gave me straight chills down the spine. I love this info hazard horror. Also, got any more of those chapters man, im desperate here 😂
Beardo
2023-07-08 20:49:07 +0000 UTCWell... that was... a lot to discover. I really really hope that's a joyful cliffhanger. Anything happens to Ophiel and we riot. 🥹
David Bailey
2023-07-08 20:07:26 +0000 UTCSuch a cute ending. I so very much look forward to the next chapter.
John Anastacio
2023-07-08 20:02:51 +0000 UTC
