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Demon lord ch3 sketch p47-50

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UMAMUSUME TG?!?

Dryad

Curious what will happen to the prince, already got four weapons coming up, and doesn't seem like the Demon Lord need shield. Unless he becomes a horse girl and is her steed?

Mira

They are all good people... kinda sad but also expecting to see the fate they'll face beauty of corruption lies in how kindness and faith being distorted, you are always good at catching and describing this kind of feeling

zzwx1215

@ibenz009 Here are the grammar changes, marked in uppercase: Page 47: Leo: My flesh and blood TURNED into steel! Why didn’t I notice and ACTED like NOTHING’S WRONG/NOTHING WAS WRONG!? Is that Blade TAKING OVER or WAS IT ME becoming it!? Still CLINGING on to what little IS left/WHAT’S LEFT of your humanity, I see. Oh dear, do you not recognize YOUR own voice? I’m you, silly. Our queen still HASN’T FINISHED/ISN’T FINISHED forging us yet. So why don’t you go back in ? I’m you . Page 48: Leo:I can feel myself BEGINNING TO RELAPSE/RELAPSING back into a demon. I’D BETTER make the most of it, then. Does it matter? IF I’m going to fall anyway … THEN I’D RATHER go out like a shooting star! This is PALADIN LEO’s last dance! YOU’D BETTER make it count, VALRIC/VELRIC! Demon Lord: HUH … I see that you still need some more discipline! It’s time for YOUR FINAL QUENCHING , my new blade. Page 49: Gilda: I’m SURPRISED Leo STILL HASN’T SUCCUMBED/IS NOT SUCCUMBING/ISN’T SUCCUMBING to his demonic nature. But it’s only A MATTER of time. Our QUEEN’S FLAME shall reforge both his mind and body. Velric: Keep her PINNED, Robard! Gilda: Hey, what GIVES!? Page 50: Gilda: So that’s what YOU GUYS ARE AFTER! Yara: I’ll deal with this lying, TWO-FACED demon.

Arthur Yeung

I love how silly Gilda is in thrid and forth images.

Kurobaka_

Dang right this is a comic! I love it! I don't even mean just as something lewd. I love the story. The way you show the characters. The way your world is working. This deserves to be published and sold in stores!

Kizu Kyoiku

Ooh, one escaped. Wonder for how long! Comments: page 1: of my body [] has changed I['ve] got breasts! ... blood turn[ed] into steel. and act[ed] like nothing [was] wrong!? is that blade tak[ing] me over or [was it] me becoming it? still cling[ing] on to what little [is] left of part of you that[ has] queen still [hasn't finished] forging us yet so why don't you [come?] back in. don't you want to become the blade worthy [of] our queen? page 2: I can feel myself begin[n]ing I['d] rather go out Paladin Leo['s] last dance! time for you[r] final quenching page 3: I'm surprise[d] Leo still [has] not succumb[ed] only [a] matter of time. Our queen['s] flame how long Leo las[ts] keep her pin[ned] hey, what give[s]?! page 4: what you guy[s] [are] after! lying two face[d] demon

Nepisa

In a bit of a rush so less comments than usual. Format: Original quote ↴ Modified quote with [notes] ↴ Modified quote without notes. Notes shown in [square brackets] Multiple possible modifications shown in {curly brackets / braces} ―――――――――― [Page 47] "Blade?" "What the hell got into me?" "Why did I call myself a blade!?" "I didn't even realize how much of my body has been changed." "I got a breasts! I look like a girl! My flesh and blood turn into steel." ↴ “I’ve got breasts! I look like a girl! My flesh and blood, turned into steel.” "Why didn't I notice and act like nothing wrong!?" ↴ “Why didn’t I notice nor act like nothing was wrong!?” "Is that blade take over me or it was me becoming it?" ↴ “Has that blade taken over me or was it me becoming it?” "Still cling on to what little left of your humanity, I see." ↴ “Still clinging on to what little is left of your humanity I see.” "...!? Who are you!?" "Oh dear, do you not recognize our own voice? I'm you, silly." "The part of you that's already accepted our ascension." "Our queen still haven't finish forging us yet." ↴ “Our queen still hasn’t finished forging us yet.” "So why don't you go back in. Don't you want to become the blade worthy to our queen?" ↴ “So why don’t you go back in. Don’t you want to become a blade worthy for our queen?” "No...! I don't...!" "Liar~ I'm you you can't hide anything from yourself." ↴ “Liar~ I’m you. You can’t hide anything from yourself.” [Page 48] "Heh, you might be right. I can feel myself begining to relapse back into a demon." ↴ “Heh, you might be right. I can feel myself beginning to relapse back into a demon.” "I better make the most of it, then." "Are you sure? Using our power will only hasten our corruption." "This time we'll never come back." "Does it matter? I'm going to fall anyway." "I rather go out like a shooting star!" "This is Paladin Leo last dance!" ↴ “This is Paladin Leo’s last dance!” "You better make it count, Varlic!" "Huh, I see that you still need some more discipline!" "It's time for you final quenching my new blade." [Should I point out that, being technical, ‘quenching’ is the rapid cooling of a metal whereas instead she blasts them with a “forging flame” which is more likely to be ‘annealing’ (heating to increase malleability) or ‘tempering’ (heating to increase toughness)?] [Page 49] "Crimson forging flame ." ↴ “Crimson forging flame” "Demon Queeeeen!" "I'm surprise Leo still not succumb to his demonic nature." ↴ “I’m surprised Leo still hasn’t succumbed to his demonic nature.” "But it's only the matter of time. Our Queen flame shall reforge both his mind and body." ↴ “But it’s only a matter of time. Our Queen’s flame shall reforge both his mind and body.” "Let's see how long Leo las..." ↴ “Let’s see how long Leo las—" "Now!" "Keep her pin, Robard!" ↴ “Keep her pinned, Robard!” "!? Hey, what give!?" ↴ “!? Hey, what gives!?” "I'm trying to be serious and this is what I get!?" ↴ “I’m trying to be serious, and this is what I get!?” "You jerk! Gilda is going to miss the best part!" "Grrr! Just shut it, damn bar wench demon!" "Go, young prince! As swift as the wind!" "Don't you dare look back!" [Page 50] "Wha..!?" "Renald!?" "So that's what you guy after!" ↴ “So that’s what you guys are after!” "Naughty paladin!" "Like I would let you escape!" "Keep going, Renald" "I'll deal with this lying two face demon." ↴ “I’ll deal with this lying two-face demon.” "Owww! Yara, you stupid meanie!"

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As good as ever!

Lauzed


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