Demon lord ch3 skecth 9-15
Added 2025-10-29 06:55:23 +0000 UTCI'm so sorry for late post. I work on old comm and then got addict to hades 2 for few day. I manage sketch 7 pages. I wish i can do one more but the time is up. Anyway apologize for my tardiness. As always if you want to help with my awful grammar please post in the comment.
Thank you for another month of support. I hope you have a spooky halloween.
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Omg the Gilda on the top right of the doorframe!!
Taaffeite-Art
2025-11-07 19:10:42 +0000 UTCThe Gilda'd Army has risen!
Benjamin Francis
2025-10-31 02:09:50 +0000 UTC@ibenz009 Page 13: Velric: WE'RE EVACUATING the area. Follow YOUNG RENALD RIGHT behind me. Renald: MA'AM, please come with me. Everyone to the KEEP. Woman: Thank you so much , Sir Knight. Velric: Yara, HOW ARE things up There? Yara: We should head back . Velric: And here I thought my retirement WOULD COME AFTER SOME nice and peaceful guard duty. Yara: HUH? Velric: If we COULD get out of this in one piece, I might. Yara: GODDESS' MESSENGER, heed me. The MARKET SQUARE HAS BEEN EVACUATED. We're returning to the keep with the CIVILIANS. Page 14: Commander: we'll concentrate OUR FORCES at the keep and create a CHOKEPOINT. Leo and Robard JUST RETURNED from the SOUTHERN DISTRICT with most of the CIVILIANS. Leo: Indeed! We've saved the innocent and ENACTED our righteous fury AGAINST the FOES of OUR Goddess! Robard and myself barely BROKE a sweat. Commander: LOOKS LIKE the enemy IS trying to spread us thin by attacking us FROM TWO FRONTS. This is not FERAL DAEMONIC BEHAVIOR. THIS IS A PLANNED/PREMEDIATED ASSAULT WITH STRATEGY. THEY SEEM TO KNOW WE only have a handful of paladins. It's unfortunate , but we can't SPARE ANY EFFORTS/AFFORD to save our lookout force. With CIVILIANS and ARTIFACTS here, we need every man we have at the KEEP. After VELRIC RETURNS, we will form a defensive formation and ... Robard, are you ready? Yeah ... Permission to enter, M'Lord! We HAVE an urgent report! Commander: Permission granted ... Page 15: Gilda: HEHE, WE'VE GOT a demon in the keep, sir!
Arthur Yeung
2025-10-30 03:12:02 +0000 UTC@ibenz009 Grammar (marked in uppercase): Page 9: Guard: RING THE ALARM BELL! WE ARE UNDER ASSAULT! Captain: Get YOUR ass up! Thomas! Bring more ARROWS to the RAMPARTS! You! ALERT THE KEEP! You three! Prepare the BARRACKS for the wounded! GO, GO, GO! If the demon BREACHES the outer wall , we're all DEAD! It's your ass on the line! So move! Rhea: Fight, fight, FIGHT, HUMAN! THE FOOD TASTES better when they're fighting back! Knight: If you freaks are so TOUGH, go attack the capital instead! Guard: GODDESS' Tits/BOSOM! Page 10: SOUTHERN GATE Female Guard: Hurry up! We're NEEDED at the NORTHERN GATE! Guard: What the hell!? How many DEVILS are AT THE NORTH WHERE THEY NEED BACKUP!? Fang: HEHEHEHE, IT SEEMS Rhea is having fun on her side. SALUTATIONS, O Brave Warrior. I'm Fang, a High Demon. PLEASURE to meet you. I'll be taking this gate OFF your HANDS now. Guard: Another demon!? How the DEVIL did she get past the OUTER gate!? Fang: Your lovely guards WERE nice enough to open the gate FOR ME. Now they're GOING TO help me take your fortress. Right, BOYS? Female Guard: It's Charm! She's using a charm curse! Anyone WITHOUT a holy amulet , get away from her! Guard: You heard the lieutenant! Back! Go get your AMULETS! Fang: HEHEHE. How adorable. You THINK you can RESIST ME WITH THAT TOY~? Page 11: Fang: How about now? Do you think your cheap trinket ACTUALLY WORKS when I'm this close? My power ISN'T RESTRICTED to draining HUMAN's life force. I can also fill my lover with energy as well. I can make A special kind of PARAMOUR who's big and strong. Here, let me SHOW you. Page 12: Fang: Now, my dearest ... let us crush ALL who STAND IN OUR WAY/ANYONE who STANDS in our way.
Arthur Yeung
2025-10-29 16:56:52 +0000 UTCMore Gilda, more fun! Here's my proposals: Page 1: We are [under] attack! Sound the ala[r]m bell! Get you[r] ass up! ... bring more arrow[s] ... prepare the barrack[s] if the demon breach[es] the outer wall we're all dea[d]! food taste[s] better when [it's] fighting back! if you freaks are so tough[], ... godess'[] tits! Page 2: southe[r]n gate we're need[ed] at... how many demon[s] are [on] the north[ern] side that [they] need a back[]up? it[] seem[s] rhea... salutation[s] o brave warrior I'm fang, a high demon. [] pleasure to meet you. ... from your hand[s] now. ... the out[]er gate[?!] your lovely guards [were] nice enough to open the gate for [] me. right[,] boy[s]? anyone who [hasn't a] holy amulet... you['ve] heard the lieutenant[! back!] go back! go get your amulet[s]! you think[] you can resist... page 3: ... trinket actually work[s] when... my power[s are not restricted] to draining human life force. I can make [a] special kind of... page 4: ... who stand[s] in our way. page 5: (general disclaimer: if the person isn't of higher military ranking, "miss" instead of "ma'am" might work better) are you alright[,] ma'[a]m? we're evacuat[ing] the area. ("please follow the young renald behind me" - what's a renald? If it's a person, it would be just "follow young Renald") ma'[a]m please come with me. how's thing[s] up there? and here I thought my retirement [was] going to be [] nice and peaceful guard duty. godess['] messe[n]ger heed me ... has been evacuate[d]. we're returning to the keep with [a] group of civilian[s]. page 6: ... our force[s] ... leo and robard [have] just return[ed] from the south district with most of the civilian[s]. ... and enact[ed] our righteous fury again[st] the [enemies(?)] of the goddess! ... myself barely [broke] a sweat. look[s] like the enemy [is] trying to spread us thin by attacking [on] two front[s]. this is not [] feral demon behaviour. this is a plan[ned] assault with strategy. they seem [to] know we... it's unfortunate[,] but we can't [afford] to save... with [the] civilian[s] and [the] artifact here... after valric return[s] we... we['ve] got an urgent report!! page 7: we['ve] got a demon... (or if multiple should be said: we['ve] got [] demon[s])
Nepisa
2025-10-29 13:17:09 +0000 UTCThis is turning out quite nicely. That said I still prefer "Marika's Tits!" as a swear. Have you given though to names for your Goddess and the background lore?
Grill Chicken
2025-10-29 12:03:04 +0000 UTC
