Liquid mercury RE ch2 p25-29 sketch
Added 2023-04-26 18:21:13 +0000 UTCI manage to draw 5 page this time. It become longer than I want but I don't want to end it to end on cliff hanger. Well can't help it now i suppose.
Anyway if find any grammar mistake and want to help fixing it feel free to post it in the comment.
Comments
@ibenz009 Ever considered an editor for the story?
Arthur Yeung
2023-04-28 12:08:39 +0000 UTCI hope they assimilate more~ I love how you design each character and how they change~
Rökkr Ragnarok
2023-04-28 05:28:05 +0000 UTCsome grammar corrections! love these pages. "What you are doing" -> "What are you doing" "Perhaps he's trying to keep me occupied" "Damage are minimal" -> "Damage is minimal" "nanite mass is neglectable" -> "nanite mass is negligible" "is register as" -> "is registered as" "Prima Secunda capture and eliminated that" -> "Prima, Secunda, capture and eliminate that" (or "Prima. Secunda." depending on tone of voice) "bio metal life form exist" -> "bio metal life forms exist" "your will are absolute" -> "your will is absolute" "successfully retrieve the" -> "successfully retrieved the"
Kauko Firetale
2023-04-27 01:46:56 +0000 UTCGiven that Amelia has shown numerous sociopathic traits, it's unlikely she ever thought that far ahead. As far as she's concerned, she'd likely make them nigh-immortal just so they would serve her while she's alive and revere her after she passes away.
Nobody-Kadaj
2023-04-26 22:06:30 +0000 UTCJune's personality was divided in two, I guess it will be the key for her to recover her body in the future, recover Miller in a certain way and get revenge. Personally I would prefer that Prima and Secunda turn all humanity into liquid metal girls, creating a new race capable of reproducing, you know, "living beings" are born, develop, reproduce and die.
Adolfo
2023-04-26 21:47:19 +0000 UTCcool
Pascal
2023-04-26 19:36:42 +0000 UTCSo June is in the missing fragment. Hope she gets her body back.
CrazedGamma1721
2023-04-26 19:32:10 +0000 UTCOoh, so the June fragment is probably in that stolen sample. I hope the sample gets away or atleast the doc finds out who sent the assassin which leads to the woman who will become Iron & part 3 one day. Cool action btw! Love the fun dynamic the doc & prima have
M
2023-04-26 18:27:36 +0000 UTCtasty sword
Sera
2023-04-26 18:27:20 +0000 UTC
