Demon lord chapter 2 p26-27
Added 2021-07-20 16:49:51 +0000 UTCAnother two page is finished. Sorry it's take longer than I expected.
Only 2 page left! I will finally be free!
As always if you found any mistake or have suggestion feel free to post in in the comment.
Comments
27.1.1 stupid => you stupid 27.1.2 criticizea => criticize a Aria, but => but | that. => that, Aria. {On second thought, "Aria" sounds better at the end.} 27.2.1 Look at what => Tsk. Look what (?) {Demon Lord is making a "tsk" kind of face, but either way works.} 27.2.3 What => What a 27.3.1 keep it. Aria? => keep it, Aria? 27.4.3 Aria, I truly enjoyed out fight. Who would have thought facing a Champion of Light could be this exhilarating.
Asani
2021-07-21 19:22:04 +0000 UTC26.4.3 {stray quotation mark at the end} 26.5.1 you are to weak => you are too weak or You are so weak you cannot even turn yourself into shadow and escape. {The dialog box flow in the last two panels is a little awkward. Both of the second bubbles are placed such that the eye wants to read them first. Really hate covering up your amazing artwork, but they could probably do with being moved down and/or over, particularly the one in panel 5.}
Asani
2021-07-21 19:21:55 +0000 UTCThere are so many lovely little touches on these pages that it's hard to choose which to point out. I especially like Aria and Gilda's expressions when Demon Lord offers to give up the sword. She just offered a dog a bone, and Aria's antennae glowing serve as good stand-ins for her ears pricking up.
Asani
2021-07-21 19:21:45 +0000 UTCYeah that is something I thought of. Maybe that Arch Purification attack was so drastic and so strongly linked to the goddess that it allowed the goddess to re evaluate the sword there by breaking the Hero’s connection to the sword and making re corrupting it impossible. Hopefully the Demon lord’s next weapon will be cool🙂and a worthy replacement.
MagicCobra911
2021-07-21 18:27:50 +0000 UTCSince the sword was linked or bound or whatever to Hero at the time, mayhaps that was enough for it to be caught up in his transformation. Could be that Aria's spell severed their link in the process of purifying it and now Demon Lord is faced with an oil and water problem.
Asani
2021-07-21 18:14:12 +0000 UTCWill you work with the original commissioner on that reboot
D Banks
2021-07-21 05:50:06 +0000 UTCI think I can see why you would want to do a Liquid Mercury reboot since part one didn’t have any built in text.
MagicCobra911
2021-07-20 23:50:07 +0000 UTCLooking real good; we're so close to the end now!
Arbiter
2021-07-20 23:32:20 +0000 UTCDarn, I've had a couple of ideas for awhile now that I've wanted to submit, that I believe you'd like -- guess I'll just have to wait, then.
Benjamin Lawton
2021-07-20 21:09:15 +0000 UTCyou retcon power
ZeroForever
2021-07-20 19:48:42 +0000 UTCI really want to do liquid mercury reboot. I may skip poll just this once.
ibenz009
2021-07-20 18:55:45 +0000 UTCOut of curiosity, will you be doing another poll once this is finally finished, to determine your next project?
Benjamin Lawton
2021-07-20 18:43:20 +0000 UTCIs the gold on Gilda’s right shoulder not supposed to be visible in any way with her WAHOOOO!! panel? Perhaps you decided it shouldn’t be in the coloring (I noticed that detail on her right shoulder was there in the sketch but not here) process since she is raising her right arm high.
MagicCobra911
2021-07-20 17:54:29 +0000 UTCTake as long as you need
Nic B
2021-07-20 17:28:22 +0000 UTCSeems like Gilda shows the most cute side fan service humor when she feel bodyshamed by Aria while Hero and Aria is dead serious to each other
Arxynos
2021-07-20 17:07:38 +0000 UTCSo good! You should make a print version of this once it’s done
Natalie
2021-07-20 17:05:34 +0000 UTCthese look great
Jagues
2021-07-20 17:03:07 +0000 UTCMan these are the best pages for Gilda and her expressiveness, she may not have been a main focus but she has been so damn sweet this whole chapter😏.
MagicCobra911
2021-07-20 16:57:28 +0000 UTCOne thing I have wondered is whether the Demon Lord is unable (if so why?) to corrupt the sword again or that she simply chose not to for the sake of a challenge? Either way I’m not gonna lie I’m still a little salty that the Demon Lord doesn’t have her Dark Sword anymore since Hero’s sword changing along with himself was one of my favorite aspects of part one. Well at least I know she will have a new weapon at some point.
MagicCobra911
2021-07-20 16:54:57 +0000 UTCLove how Gilda is hugging her with her hair.
StarGazer
2021-07-20 16:52:10 +0000 UTC
