Demon lord chapter 2 p21-22
Added 2021-06-01 18:36:10 +0000 UTCAnother 2 page done! Less than 10 page remain.
Another month has past and you still here. I thank you again for still continue support this monkey brain artist. I hope you stay on good health.
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22.1.1 You have => I see you have {Assuming the implication here is that Demon Lord didn't know for sure Aria would emerge from her chrysalis as powerful as she did.} 22.1.2 or you => or do you 22.4.2 you => you're / that's 22.5.1 If that how you want => If that is how you want it
Asani
2021-06-02 05:53:14 +0000 UTCいつも楽しみにしています。杖が隠れた目を写しているように見えてとても凛々しいです。（I always look forward to seeing it. It is very dignified, the cane seems to capture the hidden eyes.）
guitar_double
2021-06-01 21:21:20 +0000 UTCSpeaking of monkey brains... I’m picturing that "neuron activation" meme with the monkey looking at ibenz art.
Asani
2021-06-01 19:36:38 +0000 UTCAlright nice feed back I think I get you on this section now and yeah the Demon Lord chose not to scramble Aria’s brain I definitely remember that.
MagicCobra911
2021-06-01 19:28:34 +0000 UTCWell her dark side it's just aria repressed anger and negative emotions mostly not evil spirits.
ibenz009
2021-06-01 19:22:41 +0000 UTCSo the dark side that merged with her internally was small? Sorry if I seem overly critical (I only do it because i care🙂) I definitely had questions about the final pages/sketches of this chapter.
MagicCobra911
2021-06-01 19:17:59 +0000 UTCWell it's only her small desire mostly. dark aria is still aria she understands her good counterpart reason. She just represents one of aria hidden desire not all the desire . Demon lord didn't add mental corruption in her transformation process also help.
ibenz009
2021-06-01 19:16:04 +0000 UTCI suppose that makes sense, it’s still a little strange to me though that her dark side within voices her intentions (joining the Demon lord and destroying the church that sent the three of them there in the first place) and yet none of that leaked out not one little bit even though Aria seemed to be struggling mentally before this.
MagicCobra911
2021-06-01 19:11:55 +0000 UTCPage 21 looks fantastic; Aria's design is just superb. And with Page 22, we enter the finale of the comic. :)
Arbiter
2021-06-01 19:08:24 +0000 UTCDark half made her more c aggressive and cold. The dark half aspect of her personality are more on the surface now if that make sense.
ibenz009
2021-06-01 19:05:57 +0000 UTCNo kidding, Gilda’s expressions have been great this whole chapter😁pretty much and as usual the visual art of these two pages are great all around.
MagicCobra911
2021-06-01 19:05:41 +0000 UTCMonkey Brain?! More like pure genius! Another amazing chapter ^^
StarGazer
2021-06-01 19:03:30 +0000 UTCSo did Aria simply overpower/suppress her dark half because it didn’t seem like she was doing that right before this?
MagicCobra911
2021-06-01 19:02:20 +0000 UTCWe all struggle. In the end we're all monkey lol.
ibenz009
2021-06-01 18:49:53 +0000 UTCYou're no monkey brain if anything i'm more of a monkey brain for being unable to improve on anything in years XD Life sucks for me.
Jaegar Media
2021-06-01 18:45:48 +0000 UTCThis page, I was waiting for this page with the full page No regret, it's just beautiful !
Hydeang
2021-06-01 18:43:04 +0000 UTCGod I love Gilda's pout ( ◜‿◝ )♡
DaxJaden
2021-06-01 18:39:20 +0000 UTC
