Bonus Robotic inc Trap
Added 2020-08-02 16:10:48 +0000 UTCI add dialouge for fun. If you want to fix it feel free to tell me in the comment.
Also sketch are here too.
Comments
Thank you!
ibenz009
2020-08-12 15:09:12 +0000 UTCApologies for not going over the text sooner, and credit to ZeroForever and Dmitriy for their suggestions. 1.1 came => wandered notice => noticed 1.2 Robotics => Robotic {in the background} try our => try out our product as => products to 1.3.1 Rebbecca => Rebecca Are you sure? Well if you insist, Miss Rebecca. 1.3.2 Yes! Ah, this is our newest VR set. It's light and portable. Perfect for a girl on the go. Try it (won't you)! 1.4 push => press 2.1 METERIAL => MATERIAL 2.4 NANITES HAVE REACHED THE HOST BRAIN BEGIN REFORMATTING OPERATION {that font transition at the end...π} 3.1 A Few Hours Later CONVERT INTO => CONVERTED INTO A 3.5 Nice => All nice 3.6 You going => You are going Now just be => Now be any => every youur => your 4.4 COMMAND. Register Owner as Rebecca Ky Ky => Lys? OWNER [RECORDED / REGISTERED] IN PLATFORM DATA BANK 4.5 ROBOTINC => ROBOTIC SLAVE PLATFORM => MOBILE SLAVE PLATFORM 5.1 got => have (a lot => much) 5.2 FUTUREARE => FUTURE IS 5.3 (ASSISTANT ROBOT => ROBOT(IC) ASSISTANT) PLEASE ASK ME IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESTIONS ABOUT OUR PRODUCTS 5.4 HEAD SET => HEADSET IF INTERESTED JUST PUT THIS ON ALONG WITH THE CHOKER AND PRESS THE BUTTON. IT WILL (SURELY / TRULY) CHANGE YOUR LIFE.
Asani
2020-08-11 06:37:15 +0000 UTCAmazing TF story. Truly. Thank you for sharing your dialog and the sketches! (Edits attached.)
Asani
2020-08-11 06:37:04 +0000 UTCSame image, but the first is a JPG instead of a PNG like the rest. Not that it matters much, since they're both high resolution and encoded well.
Asani
2020-08-11 04:34:47 +0000 UTCAwesome! I really love your comics!
alfre-tori
2020-08-07 14:32:39 +0000 UTCMetal nipples on her dess would've make it perfect. Still fantastic job as always :)
FFV
2020-08-05 06:49:22 +0000 UTCIs this comic a sequel to the "if only she had died or gotten the same treatment" creator who ended up getting metallurgied as the end of the last mercury comic? Or is this just apparently a very similiar woman with seemingly very similiar motives? I'll admit she does seem nicer then what's her name ever did...
RedeemerofDark
2020-08-03 18:46:26 +0000 UTCThank you!
ibenz009
2020-08-03 16:58:46 +0000 UTCThank you!
ibenz009
2020-08-03 16:58:31 +0000 UTCdamnit, Ibenz! You and your ability to make me love robots!
Roxanne Giling
2020-08-03 08:09:25 +0000 UTCpanel 2 - "ORGANIC MATERIAL"
Dmitriy
2020-08-03 03:42:03 +0000 UTCI'm wondering: Given that this was a commission, is it possible for someone ELSE to commission a sequel? Or is that reserved for the original commissioner? (Similarly, are commissions open again?)
Benjamin Lawton
2020-08-02 23:36:24 +0000 UTCpanel 1 - "weird" "I never noticed" panel 3 - "where the future is within your reach" "product to your hearts content" panel 4 - "Well if you insist Miss Rebecca" "Portable VR kit
ZeroForever
2020-08-02 22:30:53 +0000 UTCwhat's different between pic 2 and 3? anyway, your skill is still amazing! (espcially, metal or slime texture)
pxxx465
2020-08-02 20:48:11 +0000 UTCYes I miss a tg sequenceπ
Stormfries
2020-08-02 20:19:03 +0000 UTC" It'll change your LIFE " Oh..
beginneroom
2020-08-02 18:25:51 +0000 UTCGod, I hope thereΒ΄s gonna be a sequel where this "sir" is gonna try the headset on. IΒ΄d love to see a TG sequence of this.
Psycake
2020-08-02 17:19:21 +0000 UTCThe dialogue is a very nice addition :)
Arbiter
2020-08-02 16:53:44 +0000 UTCGreat work, but there a few gramatic errors.
zillowt
2020-08-02 16:35:27 +0000 UTCI like it!
TEMAK
2020-08-02 16:32:42 +0000 UTCWell that turned out rather fun. Love the addition of dialogue too
StarGazer
2020-08-02 16:23:54 +0000 UTC
