Liliraune comic page 4
Added 2020-07-14 16:00:33 +0000 UTCAnother pahe done! Sorry for the wait.
As usual if you found any mistake feel free to tell me in the comment.
Comments
I didn't want to use 'feel' twice in a row and thought it worked better for the first sentence, but it could be swapped around like: 4.4 (I think) It's burrowing deeper! I have a bad feeling about this. We need to get the hell outta this plant!
Asani
2020-07-14 23:02:58 +0000 UTCBut I like the "I have a bad feeling about this" line. It's like Star Wars! :)
Jacob Barboza
2020-07-14 22:26:25 +0000 UTCThe Plant: "Say when." :starts pouring on the nectar: Anna & Lucia: "When! When!!" The Plant: "Sorry, can't hear you, I'm a plant." 4.1.4 Good. At least we are in agreement for once. 4.3 Something [jabbed / poked] me in the foot!? 4.4 I can feel it burrowing deeper! I don't like this. We need to get the hell outta this plant!
Asani
2020-07-14 17:24:08 +0000 UTCVery nice! I look forward to the next set of panels :)
Arbiter
2020-07-14 16:39:32 +0000 UTCIt's only going to get better from here XD
StarGazer
2020-07-14 16:16:18 +0000 UTCAwesome work! Looking forward to the rest of it. Unrelated: I am attempting to try/get my work up and running, if people want to see some fan art.
ElSalsaRey
2020-07-14 16:11:18 +0000 UTC
