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Liliraune comic page 1-2

Here it's is the first two complete color page!

If you found  any error feel free to tell men in the comment.

Liliraune comic page 1-2 Liliraune comic page 1-2 Liliraune comic page 1-2 Liliraune comic page 1-2

Comments

Looking great!

Roxanne Giling

I try aqua blue and she look too much like rei ayanami.

ibenz009

1.1 - 1.2 {There should be a comma or probably a semicolon after their names, and their trades should be written as "Apprentice Blacksmith" or "Blacksmith's Apprentice"} 1.1.2 [Dumb as a Rock / Subtle as a Hammer Blow] 1.2.1 Ms Gorilla => Ms. Gorilla 1.3.3 years => year's 1.4.4 jackpot => mark 2.1.1 ... You stole my idea and are trying to sabotage me! 2.1.2 ... By working together, we can increase our chances of finding the nectar, yes? 2.4.1 this was => this is

Asani

Going all in on the anime faces was definitely the right call for this comic. I drink that milkshake, and then keep on slurping to get the last little tasty bits at the bottom of the cup. Page 2 especially, Lucia hanging there like a dead fish is the tits! Here’s what I spotted:

Asani

Page 1, box 1, “dumb as rock” to either “dumb as a rock” or “dumb as rocks” take your pick

Nathaniel Merrill

:stoic Vorlon agreement:

Asani

GTFO in big letters both are pretty dumb

D Banks

I agree with the other comments the colors look very nice keep up the awesome work

seth neumann

The colours look wonderful! I look forward to when more comes in due course :)

Arbiter

Very nice. I like the full design

ElSalsaRey

So it begins!

StarGazer

Oh I wasn't expecting Lucia to be a red hair at all, I thought she would be a brunette, since the plain look works well for a cold character

M1yago

looks nice and clean

Victor


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