Liliraune comic sketch p12-14
Added 2020-06-15 18:11:28 +0000 UTCThe next sketch should be ending.
if you want to help with bad garammar or hve any suggestion for the dialouge feel free to post it in the comment.
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this is so good <3 love it
Roxanne Giling
2020-06-16 11:25:05 +0000 UTCx.y.z = page.panel.text_bubble () = optional [] = pick one 12.1.1 Hehe, you are adorable when you're blushing. 12.2.1 Wait! Stop!! I said stop, I need a time out (here)! 12.4.4 Mmm, your body is so soft... I can't keep my hands off you. 12.4.5 I'm really screwed now. 13.1.2 Your body will be like mine soon. We can share him together as one (beautiful flower), so there's no need to fight anymore. 13.2.1 Hmm, your body is covered in sweet nectar. [Let me / I could just] lick you like a lolipop. 13.3.1 But I *AM* the flower. Look, even my saliva is nectar now. [Do you want / Would you like] a taste? 13.4.2 Somebody [help / save] me!! I'm about to be eaten by a disturbingly sexy plant girl!? 14.1.1 Nooooo, not my first kiss!!! 14.1.2 I'm saving it for him! Seriously, Anna, stop right... 14.4.1 She tastes (so) sweet. This nectar is addictive, I can't stop kissing her.
Asani
2020-06-16 01:58:22 +0000 UTCBecause I've been gone all day and apparently can't leave well enough alone, attached are some select further refinements.
Asani
2020-06-16 01:58:11 +0000 UTCHas anyone tried AI coloring? Although the color is very strange, you can probably see the effect of the picture haha
Wayne Chen
2020-06-15 20:52:17 +0000 UTCThey were never said to be sisters to my knowledge, they are just rivals
RedeemerofDark
2020-06-15 20:17:11 +0000 UTCMmmm...... sister(molest)cest.
Asani
2020-06-15 20:11:03 +0000 UTCoh my her first time with a girl lol
D Banks
2020-06-15 18:37:53 +0000 UTCPage 14 Panel 1 Nooooo, this will be my first kiss!!! I was saving it for him Anna! You stop right thi... Panel 2 MMMPH!? Panel 3 Nooooooooooooooo My first kiss My first kiss is with Anna.. Panel 4 It's so sweet Her saliva really is nectar I just can't stop kissing her. Panel 5 So Sweet... So Relaxing... No, I don't want to lose myself...
Arbiter
2020-06-15 18:28:06 +0000 UTCp12 "Hehehe, you're so cute when you blush." "I never noticed how lovely you are~" "Stop, please! I said please! I need a time out!" "Oh my, I've never seen you this panicked before." "This is too weird, is this girl even Anna anymore?" "I need to stay away from her and-" "'Assess the situation?' Sorry, but I won't let you escape me. My sweet little Lucia~" "What?!" She knew what i was thinking?! I'm so screwed now." "It's useless Lucia. We are already part of this flower." "Hmm, your body is so soft, I can almost get addicted to it." p13 "That's it Lucia. Let me cover you with my nectar. Does it feel nice when I rub you like this?" "Ahhhh... n-no. ahhh." "No! We're rivals! Snap out of it- BWAH?! Even more nectar?" "Mhm, your body is drenched in nectar now. Oh, I can almost lick if off you like a lollipop." "Stop Anna, you can't let the flower win!" "But I'm part of the flower now. My hair, my breasts, even my saliva is nectar. Care to taste some?" "Taste? You don't mean... SOMEBODY HELP ME! I'M GOING TO BE EATEN BY A LUST CRAZED PLANT GIRL!" p14 "Oh no... who said anything about eating you? "N-No Anna, seriously! Your really starting to-" "MRPH?!" (Kiss~) "WHAT?! My first kiss is with Anna? Another girl?" "But... it's so sweet. She smells and taste like sweet honey..." "I feel like melting in her- No! I got to keep it together!"
StarGazer
2020-06-15 18:26:16 +0000 UTCPage 13 Panel 1 That's it Lucia, let me cover you with my nectar. Does it feel nice when I rub you like this? Ahh No Ahh Your body will be like mine soon. We will share him within this flower, there is no no point for us to fight anymore No we are rivals! Come back to your senses! Gah even more nectar!? Panel 2 Hmm your body is covered in this sweet nectar. I could lick it it like a lolipop Stop! Anna, don't let the flower win! Panel 3 But I'm part of the flower now, look, even my saliva is nectar now. Do you want to taste it? Panel 4 By taste it, you mean...? Somebody save me! I'm gonna be eaten by a mega sexy plant girl!
Arbiter
2020-06-15 18:24:18 +0000 UTCSome grammer suggestions and spellchecks for you Ibenz! Other pages in further comments :) Page 12 Panel 1 Heh Heh, you are so cute when you're blushing I never noticed how cute you are Lucia Panel 2 Stop! Pause! I said pause I need a time out! Oh my I've never seen you panic before... Panel 3 This is too weird, is this girl really the same Anna? I need to stay away from her and... Panel 4 "Assess the situation" I won't let you escape, my cute little Lucia Wah! She knows my thoughts?! It's useless Lucia, we are already part of this flower... Hmm... your body is soft, it's so nice to touch I'm so screwed now!
Arbiter
2020-06-15 18:18:30 +0000 UTC
