Liliraune comic sketch page 7-11
Added 2020-06-08 18:13:54 +0000 UTCHere are new page sketch redraw some panel on page 7 too.
If you want to help with my awful grammar feel free to tell me in the comment.
Comments
Man the only way this could be funnier is if the embarassed girl had heart eyes in response to getting seduced xD
RedeemerofDark
2020-06-09 16:18:22 +0000 UTCI always seem to be too late with my edits xD
Roxanne Giling
2020-06-09 12:49:13 +0000 UTCFor surzies~ These are just the rough layout sketches. Getting to see and comment on the development process is a nice Patreon perk.
Asani
2020-06-09 06:22:50 +0000 UTCWill This Comic Be Coloured? Because I Love Where This Is Going.
CrazedGamma1721
2020-06-09 00:08:48 +0000 UTCSorry, I just had free time when it was posted. Though I'm sure I've missed a few out. XD
StarGazer
2020-06-08 19:23:40 +0000 UTCI'll toss out my corrections for the sake of variety. Also, several places could use a comma. 7.3 Hey Anna, are you alright? 8.3 Looks like the more she drinks, the more her body changes. 8.4 She's...kinda hot...now. That pisses me off... 8.5 Why are you making her hotter, huh!? 9.1 Wha, what's happening!? 11.1.1 He...Hey...Anna. I like your new look. Green really suits you. 11.1.2 Do you mind back off bit... => You're getting awfully close... 11.1.3 Hello! Earth to Anna!
Asani
2020-06-08 19:22:09 +0000 UTCStarGazer got to the spell check first but I'm looking forward to how this will turn out!
Arbiter
2020-06-08 18:43:57 +0000 UTCPage 8 "Looks like the more drinks, the more her body changes" "She is... kind of hot now... I hate it..." Page 11 "Do you mind backing off a bit?" "Hello? Earth to Anna?" But apart from those, it's looking amazing. Really love how Anna looks now XD
StarGazer
2020-06-08 18:19:11 +0000 UTCMarvellous!!
MoralHazard
2020-06-08 18:15:32 +0000 UTC
