Liliraune comic sketch page1-4
Added 2020-05-24 18:40:07 +0000 UTCOk the first four page has been sketch. Want to try something more light hearted.
Well you guy know the drill if you want to help with any mistake on dialouge feel free to post it on the comment. Any suggestion are welcome.
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@ibenz009 I can't believe we're making someone more useless than Aqua from KonoSuba!
Arthur Yeung
2020-05-25 11:50:37 +0000 UTCI can see a few spelling and gramatical errors but I see you already have had a few offers to help correct that. Gambling Addict and Dumb as a Rock, I look forward to seeing how this turns out :)
Arbiter
2020-05-24 22:44:47 +0000 UTCCompulsive Gambler?
Asani
2020-05-24 22:43:35 +0000 UTCI do too, but what about Stay The Fuck Out?
Asani
2020-05-24 22:40:12 +0000 UTCBlahbluh!!
hawk Mitora
2020-05-24 22:21:50 +0000 UTCShouldn't the face in the final panel on page four be different from the one before it? If your gonna do that with the line art then nevermind. "Gambling Addicted" seems a bit awkward, you could try "Rampant Gambler" might sound better in that part under the cold acting girl's name.
RedeemerofDark
2020-05-24 22:05:06 +0000 UTCI love the sign
D Banks
2020-05-24 21:46:05 +0000 UTCI hope this actually goes deeper into the Liliraune lore. I love how this is so far!
TheMotionHero
2020-05-24 20:00:51 +0000 UTCVerry nice start. Really looking forward to this one!
Tamograph
2020-05-24 19:40:36 +0000 UTCIs the part of it poking deep at her feet the plant fusing with her already? 🤔
M1yago
2020-05-24 19:23:33 +0000 UTCOh wow,, I already like this a lot. It's rare that there is so much dialogue
M1yago
2020-05-24 19:04:35 +0000 UTCPlease, let them be good and not evil !!
John Hynden
2020-05-24 19:01:20 +0000 UTC"dis gon b gud" :unfolds a chair:
Asani
2020-05-24 19:00:28 +0000 UTCSo, two liliraune that before you drawn isn't appear this comic?
Evan Lee
2020-05-24 18:49:02 +0000 UTCNo completely new setting.
ibenz009
2020-05-24 18:46:47 +0000 UTCI have a question. Isn't it sequels of your previous liliraune comic?
Evan Lee
2020-05-24 18:45:16 +0000 UTCVery amusing!
ElSalsaRey
2020-05-24 18:45:09 +0000 UTCSure
ibenz009
2020-05-24 18:44:38 +0000 UTCFucking. adorable
Gustavo Tani
2020-05-24 18:44:09 +0000 UTCIt’s already looking amazing. I can message you on discord to help with the spelling if you want?
StarGazer
2020-05-24 18:43:44 +0000 UTC比想象的快多了 wonderful！very great picture.
Wayne Chen
2020-05-24 18:42:37 +0000 UTC
