Liliraune first concept design.
Added 2020-05-04 12:21:12 +0000 UTCOk here are first draft of the two main heroine. Still not final thought if you have suggestion for hairstyle feel free to tel me in the comment. Also design for liliraune outfit too.
Comments
I adore the top outfit with the ass hanging out and the heart shaped back but I think the leggings/boots or whatever they are should leave the upper thighs completely visible like the bottom outfit/third outfit. Also I love the idea of a twin tail one or even just making them have a long pony tail on the side I think would be a really beautiful and unique hair cut. As for the other I think it could also be really unique and beautiful if she had a "bun" hair style, also I agree with the consensus that thorns could look cool or unique if incorporated in the outfits as well.
RedeemerofDark
2020-05-05 01:34:38 +0000 UTCI'm honestly 100% with those suggestions, with the exception of the point about the bottom outfit. More can sexier sometimes
M1yago
2020-05-04 18:32:38 +0000 UTC- Tsundere hairstyle comment above. - Both kuudere styles are good, and I'd prefer it kept short after the TF for contrast. - Bottom Liliraune outfit looks great, but feels too substantial for the concept. - Incorporating thorns on the outfit is ideal, but maybe only on the tsundere. - Two TF designs to match their personalities would be interesting, but is obviously more work and may go against the whole twin idea. - Could try rose petal bras to further distinguish this pair from the previous two incarnations, but I'm not sure how it would look.
Asani
2020-05-04 18:11:25 +0000 UTCA real improvement outfit wise
D Banks
2020-05-04 17:06:03 +0000 UTCI prefer no tg, just a transformation of girls.
MoralHazard
2020-05-04 16:10:09 +0000 UTCohh please with tg transformation hehe
Stormfries
2020-05-04 16:07:18 +0000 UTCI like outfit 2, maybe more with a lower belly cut, the left hair on the second one is cute, and tsundere twin tails are a classic
Gustavo Tani
2020-05-04 15:58:58 +0000 UTCLiliraune outfit above, the ones with less decoration, looks good. The bottom ones, to be careful in my opinion, look too decorative.
elderwand11
2020-05-04 14:14:49 +0000 UTCShort, curly hair for tsundere can be a good idea too. Changing the third hairstyle to a little curly style would be nice. I think it will look good on tomboy tsundere.
elderwand11
2020-05-04 14:00:22 +0000 UTCI think long hair and twintails are better than others
Evan Lee
2020-05-04 13:41:32 +0000 UTCI think hairstyle like D.Va or Hyuga Hinata in Naruto can go well with liliraune. Long, straight hair. I would like a couple of long hair and short hair.
elderwand11
2020-05-04 13:31:23 +0000 UTCI like the bottom 2 of the alurun outfits looks more stylish.
ChaosOverlordZ
2020-05-04 12:54:34 +0000 UTCI think that could be a great idea yeah. Having a tomboy kind of tfed into a more "feminine" form is fun
M1yago
2020-05-04 12:48:56 +0000 UTCahoge power
ZeroForever
2020-05-04 12:48:38 +0000 UTCMaybe I'll change the tsundare into more tomboy tsundare with pony tail. Like modread I guess.
ibenz009
2020-05-04 12:38:50 +0000 UTCI really like the first versions of the heroines, and the second versions of their liliraune outfits; though I do also like the thorn aesthetic of the first ones as well. It would be interesting to see liliraune with outfits like that!
Lew
2020-05-04 12:35:06 +0000 UTCI like the fourth hairstyle the most. I think one of them should be a tomboy.
DuckHunter
2020-05-04 12:35:06 +0000 UTCWhy not try having one of them be taller then the other? Or maybe add a ponytail like you did with the more recent girl.
StarGazer
2020-05-04 12:30:40 +0000 UTCAnything but twintails imho. Too infantilising, especially on more petite women. Makes them look like they're minors.
Urazel
2020-05-04 12:28:52 +0000 UTC
